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PostSubject: Senshi: Sailor Saturn//Hotaru Tomoe   Senshi: Sailor Saturn//Hotaru Tomoe I_icon_minitime8th July 2012, 2:38 pm

General Information
Name: Hotaru Tomoe
Gender: female

Birthday: January 6
Age: 20
Birthplace: Tokyo, Japan

Physical Description (include clothing generally worn):
Hotaru has shoulder length jet black luminus hair that fans out on the ends as if cut like a bob. She has very pale skin, despite her love of the outdoors. Her skin is almost as pale as a white lily. Her eyes are a very dark purple color. The purple of her eyes can range from a royal purple color to that of an onyx stone. Her eyes shine like amythist jewels. She's shorter than most of the senshi, taller than ChibiUsa. Maybe she's about 5'1''. Her body proportions are perfect for that of a petit model.

She usually wears a lot of bright colors and flowing skirts or shirts. She likes patterns that have to do with nature. She never wears anything too dark because she's scared that she will look scary and sickly because of her pale body. Her favorite outfit is a purple flowing skirt that comes down to her mid-thigh, with lighter purple flowers on it with a thick black belt and a denim jacket over a white camisole. Her shoes would be a pair of black flats.

Personality:
Hotaru is the sweetest person you’ll ever meet. She’s extremely friendly. She can't help, but always try to make people happy and get along. People flock to her wherever she goes, not just because of her beauty and how photogenic she is, but because her kind nature shines through. She can make friends with anyone no matter who they are or what they think or believe. She's also very smart. She strives to keep her GPA at a 3.5 at the least. She's good at helping other's understand things that they have found hard to understand before. Because of this and her friendly attitude it makes her easy to aproach.

But she’s not just sweet, she’s strong, not exactly in the physical sense, but in the mental sense. She’s smart and speaks her mind. She loves to be outside and loves animals and plants. She enjoys seeing the things she's planted come to life. She hates seeing anything hirt and that also pertains to animals. Because of this she aspires to be a Vet. Although, blood isn’t her favorite thing she would like to help animals. She gets sad when she sees any hurt animals.

Any Unique Abilities/Skills: She can destroy planets, but at the cost of her own life. She also has the ability to heal small wounds.

History:
Hotaru grew up with her mother and father, whilst her father was busy with his work; she spent most of her time with her mother. Her mother taught her to love the outside. She was a very pale girl and so she had trouble in the sun, but with her mother there she loved every minute of it. But one day Hotaru and her mother took a trip to her father’s lab and there was a terrible accident. Her mother was killed and Hotaru and her father were injured. For a while after her mother’s death she couldn’t get herself to spend the time she used to outside. It hurt playing, planting flowers, etc. without her mother there.

Finally she realized that by doing the things her and her mother used to, that she was living out the life that her mother would have wanted her to have. Hotaru even convinced her father to join her some days. It made her happy to share her love of the outside with her father. One day on a trip with her father she came across an injured dog and desperately wanted to help it. She and her father brought it to a vet and Hotaru watched as the vet took care of the dog and helped it to heal. That was the moment when she realized that she wanted to become a vet. To be able to help animals get better and not have to suffer. With that dream in mind Hotaru enrolled in college to become a vet and was now in her sophomore year.

Senshi Information

Guardian: Luna

Senshi Name: Sailor Saturn
Senshi Fuku:
A silver star shaped brooch with a black front bow. Her collar, skirt, and back bow are a royal purple with a white suit. She has the same royal purple color for boots with a bit of a heel with laces that go up the length of the boots almost to her knees. Her gloves go to her elbows that are white with the same royal purple edges. She has a royal purple choker with a star on it. Her earrings are silver they look like the planet Saturn, but there are diamond shape dangles under the planet. Her tiara is golden with a silver gem in the middle.

Henshin/Transformation: Saturn Planet Power Make-up!

Powers:
Death Ribbon Reborn: Requires Saturn’s silence glaive. All she has to do is silently swing the glaive down and it has the power to destroy the world.
Silence Wall: Requires Saturn’s silence glaive. She has to say, “Silence Wall” and then a barrier of lightning shoots from the glaive and protects her from enemy attacks.
Silence Glaive Surprise: Requires Saturn’s silence glaive. She has to raise the silence glaive in front of her and then move it down as if striking something. She says, “Silence Glaive Surprise!” A ball of light forms from her staff and she destroys herself as well as destroys the world. A weakness with this one is that it can be stopped in the midst of the attack.

Weapons or Magical Items: The Silence Glaive. It is a double edged glaive on top of a black staff.

RP Sample:
It was finally the day Hotaru was waiting for! The beginning of a new school year. With her favorite outfit on she walked to College on the hot summer day. These were her favorite kinds of days. The sun was shining, all of the birds were singing, but for some reason she had this strange feeling that she was being followed. She turned around as she walked to show her brightest smile to the person behind her, but there was no one there. Was she just imagining things? Then as she turned the corner to the school a cat came out of the bushes. It was a black cat, with the weirdest crescent shaped spot on the top of her head. “Hey there kitty!” She said as she crouched down to stroke the cat’s fur. Then she heard her phone go off and realized that she was running late to class. “I gotta go kitty! See you around.” She said before she ran off to her first class.


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PostSubject: Re: Senshi: Sailor Saturn//Hotaru Tomoe   Senshi: Sailor Saturn//Hotaru Tomoe I_icon_minitime8th July 2012, 3:37 pm

Can you possibly make your paragraphs in physical description a bit lengthier? A way to help extend these paragraphs is to write as much detail as possible. Talk about what her eyes are like, how her pale skin compares to something in nature. Before you know it, you will have an amazing description! Do the same with her personality. ^_^

For abilities, is she still able to heal in your version of Hotaru? If so, please add it.



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PostSubject: Re: Senshi: Sailor Saturn//Hotaru Tomoe   Senshi: Sailor Saturn//Hotaru Tomoe I_icon_minitime8th July 2012, 3:41 pm

I totally forgot to add that! Thanks Saturn. I'll fix the description soon.
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PostSubject: Re: Senshi: Sailor Saturn//Hotaru Tomoe   Senshi: Sailor Saturn//Hotaru Tomoe I_icon_minitime8th July 2012, 3:42 pm

http://www.thegalaxycauldronforums.com/t2289-ami-reworked#57670

Here is my Ami redone that I am currently working on. One of my paragraphs in the description is short, but the first makes up for it.
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PostSubject: Re: Senshi: Sailor Saturn//Hotaru Tomoe   Senshi: Sailor Saturn//Hotaru Tomoe I_icon_minitime9th July 2012, 7:08 am

Once this is finished, can you change your status from empty to "complete" please. This makes it stand out more when I scroll the sections.
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PostSubject: Re: Senshi: Sailor Saturn//Hotaru Tomoe   Senshi: Sailor Saturn//Hotaru Tomoe I_icon_minitime9th July 2012, 11:11 am

Sure. How's the updated physical description. Do you think it needs more?
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PostSubject: Re: Senshi: Sailor Saturn//Hotaru Tomoe   Senshi: Sailor Saturn//Hotaru Tomoe I_icon_minitime9th July 2012, 7:44 pm

Oh wow, two powers to destroy the world @_@ I am a bad Senshi :p

I like how you made it your own for the redone RP and managed to keep some of her original things.

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PostSubject: Re: Senshi: Sailor Saturn//Hotaru Tomoe   Senshi: Sailor Saturn//Hotaru Tomoe I_icon_minitime10th July 2012, 7:06 am

YAY! Smile
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