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Name: Sun, Kiiro(Yellow)

Age/Date of Birth: June 10th (She's the same age as Usagi, see history)

Birth Place: The Temple of Apollo

Job: Princess of the Sun, and since she's turned 15 She's been an ambassador of sorts from the sun to the other kingdoms inside of the sun kingdom.

Appearance:

Civilian Clothing: Light blue jeans with rips in the knees and either a bright yellow or orange t-shirt or tank top.

Personality: Kiiro has a bright, sunny personality, most of her people find this refreshing from how serious her mother is, though she knows when to be serious and can talk her way out of almost any situation, she often uses her charm and quick whit to get people to agree with her when things seem like there going to drag on and she would protect her people and her friends with her life if needed.

Likes: Kiiro loves to swim, she also loves daylight.

Dislikes: Kiiro hates darkness, she likes to be asleep before night when on earth and likes to not wake up until its light out again.

History: Kiiro is actually a Princess of a different kingdom, one that has been a great ally to the moon kingdom since the time of the first Kings and Queens founded the kingdoms on each planet and star. The kingdom that Kiiro is princess of the the Sun Kingdom, the sun kingdom consists of all the constellation and star kingdom's and the Zodiac's are her main guard's, Every generation the princesses of both the sun and the moon kingdom are astral twins(Meaning they were born at the exact same time), that was broken when Usagi died and was sent into the future, but started again when Usagi was reborn. The reason for this is because the first Queen of the moon Artemis Selene and the first King of the sun Apollo were twins and used there powers to bind the fates of there descendents.

Kiiro resides on most days in the Sun Palace, it's made of white stone with gold etched into each wall along the top and bottom, in the throne room there is a picture of the first king Apollo etched into the wall, and the etching is filled with gold, Kiiro's father died when she was young, he got very sick and a cure could not be found, now her mother Aparra rules the kingdom on her own. Kiiro normally does not were a tiara unless at official events, she feels that the sun symbol on her forehead is proof enough that she is indeed Princess Kiiro of the Sun. The sun symbol of a circle on her forehead that fades from yellow in the center, to orange in the middle and red on the outside.

Kiiro has always loved hanging out with her Zodiac Guardian's, but she's closest to the Princess of the Aries Kingdom, who is the head of her guard.(the order of her guard goes in order of the zodiac signs in the year, the gemini's each have there own rank.) When she was 13 she meet Kaji, the prince of the constellation Phoenix-Phoenix is one of the two military kingdoms in the sun kingdom, the other being the Aries kingdom-and immediately fell for him, she invited him to stay for a bit longer and he agreed to it and during that time they got to know each other and after so long they fell in love, they started dating a month after they meet and he proposed to her not to long ago.

Name: Sailor Sun

Transformation Call:
Senshi~Sun Power Transformation!
Princess~Golden Princess Transformation!

Item's:
Solar Diamond~The sun kingdom's equivalent of the silver crystal it's about the size of a closed fist.
Staff of the Sun~
the Solar Diamond goes in the spot in the center of the staff
Sword of the Sun~

Outfits:
Sailor Sun~
Princess Kiiro~

in her princess form her staff changes to this:

the solar diamond goes on top of the staff.

Sun Queen Kiiro Outfit~

She has the same staff as in her princess form.

Attacks:She can cause her enemies to suffer heatstroke hallucinations by sending a powerful wave of heat at the opponent, though she can't control what they see, this is called'Heatstroke'
Another attack she has is she can blind her opponent's for about 30 seconds with a dazzling blast of sunlight, this is called'Blinding Sunlight'
Another attack is she can shoot balls of fire from the center part of her staff, this is called'Ball of Fire'
Her last attack is, she can send wip like strands of fire and sunlight at her opponent from her fingertips , this is called 'Firelight Whip'
Her last ability is she can heal using either sunlight or her sunlight reserves , this is called 'Sunlight Healing'

Powers: Because of being astral twins with Usagi they can sort of sense where each other are when they know what to look for, they can also talk to each other telepathically when in the same room.
Kiiro can also solidify sunlight into gold.

Name: Apollo

Type: Guardian Solar Dog, they guide Senshi and Knight's of the Sun Kingdom.

Age/Date of birth: N/A but looks about 17 in his human form.

Gender: Male

Birth Place: Second star in Canis Minor.

Jobs: He is the guardian and friend of Sailor Sun/Kiiro

Appearance: A Yellow Retriever with a golden Sun symbol on his forehead.

Personality: He's very kind, but he's also a bit of a flirt, he loves to run and likes to explore forests.

History: For the last 17 years of his life he has been a guardian and Guide of Kiiro, Princess of the Sun kingdom. He cares for his charge very much and will protect her when the need arises. He is originally from the secondary star of Canis Minor but was moved to the sun to be Kiiro's Guardian when he was 2 years old.

Likes: He likes the sun, swimming and running.

Dislikes: He dislikes enemies as well as having to fight, but he will fight when it's needed.

Weapon:

the thing's on his hands.

Powers: Once Solar Dogs reach the human age of 5 they gain the ability to change into a human for, though they have to wait at least an hour before changing form again each time they change form.

Human Form:

I would love some feedback on these characters if anyone is willing to give it

Question about Apollo!

.... Have you ever read the manga, Her Majesty's Dog? :3

No I have not, why???

Oh, I highly recommend it! Here! Her Majesty's Dog - just read the description ^^

I'll check it out, but I forgot to add something, I'm about add it. Kiiro is in love with and engaged to the prince of the constellation Phoenix.

I think I'm going to describe how they met and all that to in the bio :\

Apollo is just like her best friend and consultant, he's not in love with her or anything like it says Hyoue is with Amane

!! Oh, I didn't mean that at all! Just the dog turning into a human to protect her part - I thought that since you liked that idea in your own story, you might enjoy the manga. It's one of my favorites. ^^

Well I'm reading it now ^^ it seems pretty good so far.

I've added on to Kiiro's History and Personality.

I love reading how other people envision the senshi of the sun. Your ideas are great. Just one thing... and I don't mean to nitpick, buy you should really link and credit each of the artists' images you used in your post. Some artists get a little annoyed when people don't or post their pics somewhere else without permission.

If you want some original images, I can try my hand at the designs?