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Goddess Yami Lotus Crystal
Title : Dark Lord Spam Goddess Yami Posts : 9845 Join date : 2011-07-10 Age : 34 Location : La La Land
| Subject: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 22nd July 2012, 8:46 pm | |
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General Information
Name: General/Prince Zoisite Gender: male Birthday: June 3rd Age: 16-17 (19 in Earth Kingdom) Birthplace: Earth Cannon used:Manga (material collections), anime and PGSM. Physical description: Zoisite is about average height for man (5'10, the oracle refer to him as the same height as Jadeite). He has long wavy dirty blond hair. To control his long hair Zoistie will pull it up into a ponytail. He has long face, but has small lips and a small nose. His ears are also rather small and they're also pierced. He likes to wear small green round earrings. Zoisite also has huge light green eyes. Zoisite wears a gray suit with a green trim and black boots. He also wears a pair long white gloves. For formal attire Zoisite wears white jacket golden trimmed piece with dark brown trouser and a brown cape. Any unique abilities/skills: Zoisite is a natural at playing the piano, some people call him prodigy. Personality:Out of the four generals Zoisite is very effeminate. He keeps up with his hygiene and always has a clean appearance (He won't even allow his clothes to get wrinkled!). He gets grossed out very easily and cannot stand having dirt on his clothes or on his body. He also bit of a neat freak and has to keep everything in his room organize. Sometimes he can go on an OCD tangent if someone messes with his belongings. Zoiste has a youngest child mentality. He considers himself to be entitled to everything and tends to throw a fit if he doesn't get his way. Basically he can act as a spoil brat. Usually around other people can be very be very quiet and subdued. He feels he's above talking to normal people and tends to think he's better than them. He uses his quiet nature to his advantage by sneaking up on his opponent. Zoisite is very intelligent. He's very good at problem solving and quick thinking. He can easily point out his opponent's weaknesses. Zoisite is also very loyal to his prince, Endymion. He'll do anything to ensure that his prince his safe. When it comes to protecting the prince, he becomes quite serious. He's also very loyal to Kunzite and views him like a big brother. History:Zoisite was born to one of the four Kings of Terra. At young age his father took him to the celebration of the birth of Prince Endymion. His father gotten to an heated argument when the other three Kings of Terra arrived with their sons. The argument rose when the idea of bringing their own son was not original. Old wounds were open and the argument didn't end until Helios, the high priest of Elysian stepped in. His solution was to have sons be raised as a guardian for Prince Endymion. The kings anger toward each other demised knowing that their sons would be honored and well respected. Helios then suggested for the kings' sons to return to Elysian at the age of five (Kunzite was an exception to this since he was already of age ). At the age of five Zoisite returned to Elysian to live with the three other Kings' sons, Nephrite, Kunzite, and Jadeite. He also lived with Prince Endymion. Zoisite was given a good education and since the age of five he was very intelligent. He would always impressed his teachers with his high intelligence. As Zoisite grew older he was train in combat to protect Prince Endymion and became the second lowest rank of the four generals . He was a quick learner by using his intelligence to his advantage. When he was not in his classes or at combat training, Zoisite would hang out with the Nephrite, Kunzite, and Jadeite. Occasionally Endymion when he was free from his own classes. The boys were boys they would often explore the areas around them and play adventure games. When Zoisite was alone, he would play the piano. He picked up this interest from his fine art classes. Zoisite's musical skills impressed his teachers and encourage him to preform for high officials. Zoisite agreed and preformed at many recitals which is how he became obsessed with his appearance. Becoming obsessed with his appearance made him get teased by Nephrite and Jadeite. However Kunzite would stand up for Zoisite which made the two of them became close. Zoisite admire Kunzite and respected him. He was like a big brother to him. As then generals and the prince grew older tension was forming when their prince was seeing Princess Serenity. Zoisite grew very suspicious about their prince's relationship with the moon princess. The other generals also grew suspicious which grew even more when they met a woman name Beryl. She used their suspicious for her advantage and convinced Zoisite and the other generals to join her side to conquer the Moon Kingdom. On the night of attack of the Moon Kingdom Zoisite and the other generals meant their demise when Queen Serenity used the Silver Crystal. The power of the crystal caused Zoisite's and the other generals' souls were sealed inside stones. Years later Zoisite found himself awaken by Beryl and she brainwashed him into working for the Dark Kingdom. He served her by stealing energy from humans and searched for the Silver Crystal. Near the end of the battle of the Sailor Senshi and Dark Kingdom Zoisite was killed in the line of action. He was choking Sailor Moon during a fight, he was sliced in half by Sailor V's boomerang. Later during the final battle of the Dark Kingdom Zoisite and the other generals were revived and returned to being stones once again and throughout the years Mamoru calls upon his spirit for advice. Storyline Specific Information:Earth Kingdom: Zoisite is Prince's Endymion royal guard during the Golden Kingdom era/Silver Mill Era. He and the other generals are traveling with the prince to attend a royal wedding. Forgotten Heroes: Zoisite has been reborn as a teenager after the fall of the Dark Kingdom. He lives with the other generals who are also teenagers. They have memories of the past and believe that they are brothers. Zoisite is 16 and in his first year of high school. He belongs the classical music club. Love and Spite: Zoisite's name is Zeke in this version. He is starting his senior year in high school. He's been best friends with Endymion Shields since grade school. They met in the first grade when Endymion saved him from a bunch of bullies. Zeke is very smart and is a gifted pianist. He takes AP classes and is in the classical musical club. RP sample:
Zoisite was in his room one night sitting at his piano's bench. He was busy writing a new song to preform for Earth's governmental officials. He promised his teacher that he would write a new song, but he had massive writer's block. He glanced outside his window and noticed it looked like a nice clear night. Perhaps the cool air could help stimulate his brain. Zoisite rose from the bench and grabbed a coat from his closet. He then left the room and headed outside. Before leaving the palace's ground, he grabbed a lantern from horses stable and lit the wick. He headed out of the stable and found a path that headed into a forest. He walked down the path and as he was walking into the forest he saw nothing but the trees and the moonlight lighting up the path. He came to a stop when the path lead him to a meadow. He looked around and saw no signs of life. Zoisite walked off the path and stood in the middle of the meadow. He then gazed up at the heavens and watched the stars and the moon. As he stood there watching the stars and the moon Zoisite heard a melody playing in the back of his head. He smiled softy when he realized the heavens helped his writer's block. He then made his way back to the palace before he forgot the sweet melody. Who knew that the moon could be so inspiring.
Last edited by Yamichan16 on 27th October 2014, 2:46 pm; edited 17 times in total (Reason for editing : (updated the title of the topic)) |
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Goddess Yami Lotus Crystal
Title : Dark Lord Spam Goddess Yami Posts : 9845 Join date : 2011-07-10 Age : 34 Location : La La Land
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 25th July 2012, 1:34 pm | |
| It's still in progress, but I need a little help. I need to expand upon his personality a bit and I also need help with describing his clothes. I'm not sure if wears the suit from the manga and the anime back during the Earth Kingdom. |
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Sailor Uranus Outer Senshi Admin Roleplay Director
Title : Oh, you mean you DON'T have an Elephabulous? Shame. Posts : 13368 Join date : 2011-09-15 Age : 36 Location : NE Texas
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 25th July 2012, 1:49 pm | |
| They do! ^^ You can even spot Endymion wearing it at one point (when he's kissing Serenity in the garden) and Kunzite wearing it when Venus comes to fetch Serenity and he teases about their having an unruly Princess. The other attire they have - the white jacket golden-trimmed piece with dark brown trousers and the brown capes - I had always taken as being more of their formal or dress uniform. As far as the effeminate and youngest child in the family vibe goes, I know that of all of my mom's 5 kids, the youngest, Connor, is the most entitled. He tends to think that everything should just be handed to him because he's the youngest and everyone else has one of something (neglecting to think that we had to wait until we were such-and-such age to get it ¬.¬), so maybe have him being a little spoiled or entitled might help? And feeling entitled could also segue into his being subdued - he feels he's a little above speaking to normal people, and by thinking himself better than they and his high intelligence, he spots weaknesses with ease and is able to plan a foe's (or any normal person whom he doesn't like) downfall simply; or you could go opposite and say he's quiet because he still feels like he's earning his place, being youngest and all. Now, for effeminate, you could have him as clean (in appearance and hygiene), tidy and organized (with his rooms, his writing style, etc.), dislikes gross things (not that he has to squeal or something, but when, say, Nephrite comes running in with an 'OH MY GOD YOU HAVE TO SMELL THIS!" Zoisite could be like "O.o Um, how about no, you baffoon? That's disgusting."), etc.? |
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Goddess Yami Lotus Crystal
Title : Dark Lord Spam Goddess Yami Posts : 9845 Join date : 2011-07-10 Age : 34 Location : La La Land
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 25th July 2012, 1:53 pm | |
| This sounds great! Thanks for the help Uranus! I shall work on this later I need to write a paper for my internship that I did this summer. |
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Yumi Senior Member Saturn Emeritus
Title : (∩`-´)⊃━☆゚.*・。magical weirdo, Original Saturn Posts : 9410 Join date : 2011-08-19 Age : 33 Location : Scranton, Pa
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 26th July 2012, 8:02 pm | |
| Looks good so far. Keep up the work, Yami ^_^ |
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Yumi Senior Member Saturn Emeritus
Title : (∩`-´)⊃━☆゚.*・。magical weirdo, Original Saturn Posts : 9410 Join date : 2011-08-19 Age : 33 Location : Scranton, Pa
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 31st July 2012, 8:02 am | |
| Noting that Yami is currently on LOA |
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Chmia Lotus Crystal
Title : Leg Lamp Power, Make Up! Posts : 8262 Join date : 2011-10-01 Age : 35 Location : San Antonio, Texas
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 22nd October 2012, 2:06 pm | |
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Yumi Senior Member Saturn Emeritus
Title : (∩`-´)⊃━☆゚.*・。magical weirdo, Original Saturn Posts : 9410 Join date : 2011-08-19 Age : 33 Location : Scranton, Pa
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 13th November 2012, 5:17 pm | |
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Goddess Yami Lotus Crystal
Title : Dark Lord Spam Goddess Yami Posts : 9845 Join date : 2011-07-10 Age : 34 Location : La La Land
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 14th November 2012, 8:43 pm | |
| Thinking about dropping out of this rp. :/ I'm not sure yet so I'm not going to mess around with profile quite yet. |
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Yumi Senior Member Saturn Emeritus
Title : (∩`-´)⊃━☆゚.*・。magical weirdo, Original Saturn Posts : 9410 Join date : 2011-08-19 Age : 33 Location : Scranton, Pa
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 16th November 2012, 10:34 pm | |
| Ok. Just let me know. If you drop out, I will lock this profile. |
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Goddess Yami Lotus Crystal
Title : Dark Lord Spam Goddess Yami Posts : 9845 Join date : 2011-07-10 Age : 34 Location : La La Land
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 29th November 2012, 9:23 am | |
| Okay, I'm going to stick with this rp. I updated the profile a little bit. I'm not sure about his history though. :/ |
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Chmia Lotus Crystal
Title : Leg Lamp Power, Make Up! Posts : 8262 Join date : 2011-10-01 Age : 35 Location : San Antonio, Texas
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 9th December 2012, 11:31 am | |
| What has you troubled about his history? YOu could always describe his current life in vague, awesome detail. ^.^ |
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Goddess Yami Lotus Crystal
Title : Dark Lord Spam Goddess Yami Posts : 9845 Join date : 2011-07-10 Age : 34 Location : La La Land
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 9th December 2012, 11:46 am | |
| I think I got his history, but I should include his time with Dark Kingdom during the Tokyo City era just so I can use this profile universally. Thanks for suggesting that. ^.^
I'll work this profile sometime this week. I need to be studying. >.> |
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Goddess Yami Lotus Crystal
Title : Dark Lord Spam Goddess Yami Posts : 9845 Join date : 2011-07-10 Age : 34 Location : La La Land
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 15th December 2012, 4:41 pm | |
| I finally have this profile ready for review! Sorry it took sooo long. >.< |
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Yumi Senior Member Saturn Emeritus
Title : (∩`-´)⊃━☆゚.*・。magical weirdo, Original Saturn Posts : 9410 Join date : 2011-08-19 Age : 33 Location : Scranton, Pa
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 16th December 2012, 11:28 am | |
| Looks good so far! Can you add that we is the second lowest rank? Also, perhaps add how he was destroyed in the end with some detail as to what happened? After that it will be good to go |
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Goddess Yami Lotus Crystal
Title : Dark Lord Spam Goddess Yami Posts : 9845 Join date : 2011-07-10 Age : 34 Location : La La Land
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 16th December 2012, 1:07 pm | |
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Yumi Senior Member Saturn Emeritus
Title : (∩`-´)⊃━☆゚.*・。magical weirdo, Original Saturn Posts : 9410 Join date : 2011-08-19 Age : 33 Location : Scranton, Pa
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 18th December 2012, 6:03 pm | |
| LOl yes, He |
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Goddess Yami Lotus Crystal
Title : Dark Lord Spam Goddess Yami Posts : 9845 Join date : 2011-07-10 Age : 34 Location : La La Land
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 18th December 2012, 7:33 pm | |
| Okay, I'll get on this tomorrow. I have a friend over at the moment. |
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Goddess Yami Lotus Crystal
Title : Dark Lord Spam Goddess Yami Posts : 9845 Join date : 2011-07-10 Age : 34 Location : La La Land
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 19th December 2012, 9:15 am | |
| Okay, I updated his history. The changes are in bold. ^^ I went with the manga events for his history. |
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| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 24th December 2012, 11:35 pm | |
| Looking good Yami. But I personally would like to see something about what he wears causally, you know we can't always be in our dress or formal wear. Or does he wear his grey suit all the time? Would he been seen in maybe nice jeans and a pressed button down say on his off days? All over it's good and I like it, but personally I'd like to see a little more on his attire, but that's up to you. Really good profile. Love the changes. |
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Goddess Yami Lotus Crystal
Title : Dark Lord Spam Goddess Yami Posts : 9845 Join date : 2011-07-10 Age : 34 Location : La La Land
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 25th December 2012, 9:58 am | |
| Thanks. I really have no clue what they would wear casually. I believe in a flashback they're wearing those gray suits. |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 26th December 2012, 12:16 pm | |
| Yeah, it was just a thought really, I personally like to give my characters something casual to wear, but that's me Over I really like it. |
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Goddess Yami Lotus Crystal
Title : Dark Lord Spam Goddess Yami Posts : 9845 Join date : 2011-07-10 Age : 34 Location : La La Land
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 26th December 2012, 2:35 pm | |
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Yumi Senior Member Saturn Emeritus
Title : (∩`-´)⊃━☆゚.*・。magical weirdo, Original Saturn Posts : 9410 Join date : 2011-08-19 Age : 33 Location : Scranton, Pa
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 26th December 2012, 7:39 pm | |
| Is this ready for review, again, Yaimi? |
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Goddess Yami Lotus Crystal
Title : Dark Lord Spam Goddess Yami Posts : 9845 Join date : 2011-07-10 Age : 34 Location : La La Land
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 26th December 2012, 7:57 pm | |
| Yes. Should I add more to his clothes? I have no idea what people would wear casually back then. |
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Yumi Senior Member Saturn Emeritus
Title : (∩`-´)⊃━☆゚.*・。magical weirdo, Original Saturn Posts : 9410 Join date : 2011-08-19 Age : 33 Location : Scranton, Pa
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 26th December 2012, 8:44 pm | |
| Nah, it is fine Approved. Thank you for your work fixing things |
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Goddess Yami Lotus Crystal
Title : Dark Lord Spam Goddess Yami Posts : 9845 Join date : 2011-07-10 Age : 34 Location : La La Land
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 26th December 2012, 8:45 pm | |
| Awesome! Thanks and no problem! ^^ |
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Goddess Yami Lotus Crystal
Title : Dark Lord Spam Goddess Yami Posts : 9845 Join date : 2011-07-10 Age : 34 Location : La La Land
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 10th July 2014, 6:32 pm | |
| I updated my approved bio for Forgotten Heroes. It is now using the advance profile outline. |
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Tsuki-love♥ RP Admin Neptune Emeritus
Title : Myuteer ~ GC's official Harumichitic Posts : 10050 Join date : 2012-07-06 Age : 28 Location : Kaguya Shima
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 10th July 2014, 9:36 pm | |
| Update has been noted. |
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Goddess Yami Lotus Crystal
Title : Dark Lord Spam Goddess Yami Posts : 9845 Join date : 2011-07-10 Age : 34 Location : La La Land
| Subject: Re: (Approved) Advanced General / Prince Zoisite 27th October 2014, 2:46 pm | |
| Added Love and Spite to the storylines! |
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