bump. would anyone want to participate in this?

HikariDemand wrote:

bump. would anyone want to participate in this?

As far as asking members to participate, this should be done in the OOC thread since non staff members aren't permitted to reply in storyline submission


Edited Summary:

This is a story that takes place after defeating the dead moon circus, well actually after defeating Nehelenia. Mamoru has gone off to study abroad in America, and he actually makes it....because in this story Galaxia does not exist,  Mamoru doesn't have his star seed stolen & safely arrives in America. The outers return to their planets (or go off and do other things), Chibiusa goes back to the 30th century, and Usagi, the Outers  and the Inners return to a normal life life of normalcy as high school students. Because all is calm, Usagi decides to go pay a surprise visit to Mamoru in America without her friends knowing, and when I say surprise, she doesn't tell anyone (mostly because she is so excited to see Mamoru she can hardly wait. Usagi makes it to America and finds Mamoru's apartment. The girls get so caught up in their life of normalcy that they do not notice when the new and very strong enemy approaches and attacks, let alone notice Usagi is no where to be seen.  

On a note: Maybe we should remove the mentioning of Chibiusa & the Outers from the summary in general since you indicate it will be only Inners in the storyline  Totally up to you though.


Note about Details:
I do not mean in any way to be knit picky, but can you clean up your additional detail summary a bit? You can use the way I cleaned up your regular summary as a guide. This is your story line application, therefor it should be straight and to the point, instead of """maybe this... oh and..."   If you need help cleaning up the detail but, please let me know




Overall, this idea is highly creative and I can picture all the girls suddenly going... LIKE OMGZZZ WHERE DID USAGI GO?!

  

And Ami is all like... OH NO I DIDN'T REALIZE... and Rei is all like... I HATE YOU USAGI!

  

Sorry.. I am fan girling here 

 :bunnykonataeye

Bump

Final Admin Bump. If no changes are made to this by 6/12, one week from now, it will be added to the graveyard. However, you may request it to be moved back from the graveyard at any time.

Sailor Saturn wrote:

HikariDemand wrote:

bump. would anyone want to participate in this?

As far as asking members to participate, this should be done in the OOC thread since non staff members aren't permitted to reply in storyline submission


Edited Summary:

This is a story that takes place after defeating the dead moon circus, well actually after defeating Nehelenia. Mamoru has gone off to study abroad in America, and he actually makes it....because in this story Galaxia does not exist,  Mamoru doesn't have his star seed stolen & safely arrives in America. The outers return to their planets (or go off and do other things), Chibiusa goes back to the 30th century, and Usagi, the Outers  and the Inners return to a normal life life of normalcy as high school students. Because all is calm, Usagi decides to go pay a surprise visit to Mamoru in America without her friends knowing, and when I say surprise, she doesn't tell anyone (mostly because she is so excited to see Mamoru she can hardly wait. Usagi makes it to America and finds Mamoru's apartment. The girls get so caught up in their life of normalcy that they do not notice when the new and very strong enemy approaches and attacks, let alone notice Usagi is no where to be seen.  

On a note: Maybe we should remove the mentioning of Chibiusa & the Outers from the summary in general since you indicate it will be only Inners in the storyline  Totally up to you though.


Note about Details:
I do not mean in any way to be knit picky, but can you clean up your additional detail summary a bit? You can use the way I cleaned up your regular summary as a guide. This is your story line application, therefor it should be straight and to the point, instead of """maybe this... oh and..."   If you need help cleaning up the detail but, please let me know




Overall, this idea is highly creative and I can picture all the girls suddenly going... LIKE OMGZZZ WHERE DID USAGI GO?!

  

And Ami is all like... OH NO I DIDN'T REALIZE... and Rei is all like... I HATE YOU USAGI!

  

Sorry.. I am fan girling here 

 :bunnykonataeye

sorry i just saw this. I can go clean it up, if anyone shows interst if not then I will let this baby go.

--Moved to graveyard--