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 A New Beginning (Relaxed RP)

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Hikari-chan
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PostSubject: A New Beginning (Relaxed RP)   A New Beginning (Relaxed RP) I_icon_minitime8th May 2014, 4:27 pm

Name of the Storyline:  A New Beginning  


Name of the Creator(s):HikariDemand  


Forum:Free- Forum (I think) if I am wrong someone please let me know and move to where it needs to be.
 
Plot Summary:This is a story that takes place after defeating the dead moon circus, well actually after defeating Nehelenia. Mamoru has gone off to study abroad in America, and he actually makes it....because in this story Galaxia does not exist, so Mamoru never has his star seed stolen. The outers return to their planets (or go off and do other things), Chibiusa goes back to the 30th century, and Usagi and the Inners return to a life of normalcy as high school students. Because all is calm. Usagi decides to go pay a surprise visit to Mamoru in America, and when I say surprise, she doesn't tell anyone (mostly because she is so excited to see Mamoru she can hardly wait. Usagi makes it to America and finds Mamoru's apartment. The girls get so caught up in their life of normalcy that they do not notice when the new and very strong enemy appraches and attacks, let alone notice Usagi is no where to be seen.  


Details on any necessary information:This story will start from everyone going back to a normal life and will progress down the road of the Inners battling the bad guys and Usagi and Mamoru in America...until they decide or what not to go back and save the day. Will a new leader emerge?. Oh and if someone has an idea for the enemy (like what could they be called) what are they after, etc...help would greatly be appreciated.  


Restrictions: no otaku characters
no outer senshi
no chibiusa
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PostSubject: Re: A New Beginning (Relaxed RP)   A New Beginning (Relaxed RP) I_icon_minitime10th May 2014, 9:04 pm

bump. would anyone want to participate in this?
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PostSubject: Re: A New Beginning (Relaxed RP)   A New Beginning (Relaxed RP) I_icon_minitime13th May 2014, 8:22 pm

HikariDemand wrote:
bump. would anyone want to participate in this?

As far as asking members to participate, this should be done in the OOC thread since non staff members aren't permitted to reply in storyline submission Wink


Edited Summary:

This is a story that takes place after defeating the dead moon circus, well actually after defeating Nehelenia. Mamoru has gone off to study abroad in America, and he actually makes it....because in this story Galaxia does not exist,  Mamoru doesn't have his star seed stolen & safely arrives in America. The outers return to their planets (or go off and do other things), Chibiusa goes back to the 30th century, and Usagi, the Outers  and the Inners return to a normal life life of normalcy as high school students. Because all is calm, Usagi decides to go pay a surprise visit to Mamoru in America without her friends knowing, and when I say surprise, she doesn't tell anyone (mostly because she is so excited to see Mamoru she can hardly wait. Usagi makes it to America and finds Mamoru's apartment. The girls get so caught up in their life of normalcy that they do not notice when the new and very strong enemy approaches and attacks, let alone notice Usagi is no where to be seen.  

On a note: Maybe we should remove the mentioning of Chibiusa & the Outers from the summary in general since you indicate it will be only Inners in the storyline Wink Totally up to you though. ♥️


Note about Details:
I do not mean in any way to be knit picky, but can you clean up your additional detail summary a bit? You can use the way I cleaned up your regular summary as a guide. This is your story line application, therefor it should be straight and to the point, instead of """maybe this... oh and..." Wink  If you need help cleaning up the detail but, please let me know Smile




Overall, this idea is highly creative and I can picture all the girls suddenly going... LIKE OMGZZZ WHERE DID USAGI GO?!

 A New Beginning (Relaxed RP) 1023433532 

And Ami is all like... OH NO I DIDN'T REALIZE... and Rei is all like... I HATE YOU USAGI!

 A New Beginning (Relaxed RP) 1644003999 

Sorry.. I am fan girling here 

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PostSubject: Re: A New Beginning (Relaxed RP)   A New Beginning (Relaxed RP) I_icon_minitime17th May 2014, 11:29 am

Bump
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PostSubject: Re: A New Beginning (Relaxed RP)   A New Beginning (Relaxed RP) I_icon_minitime5th June 2014, 8:40 pm

Final Admin Bump. If no changes are made to this by 6/12, one week from now, it will be added to the graveyard. However, you may request it to be moved back from the graveyard at any time. Wink
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PostSubject: Re: A New Beginning (Relaxed RP)   A New Beginning (Relaxed RP) I_icon_minitime5th June 2014, 8:53 pm

Sailor Saturn wrote:
HikariDemand wrote:
bump. would anyone want to participate in this?

As far as asking members to participate, this should be done in the OOC thread since non staff members aren't permitted to reply in storyline submission Wink


Edited Summary:

This is a story that takes place after defeating the dead moon circus, well actually after defeating Nehelenia. Mamoru has gone off to study abroad in America, and he actually makes it....because in this story Galaxia does not exist,  Mamoru doesn't have his star seed stolen & safely arrives in America. The outers return to their planets (or go off and do other things), Chibiusa goes back to the 30th century, and Usagi, the Outers  and the Inners return to a normal life life of normalcy as high school students. Because all is calm, Usagi decides to go pay a surprise visit to Mamoru in America without her friends knowing, and when I say surprise, she doesn't tell anyone (mostly because she is so excited to see Mamoru she can hardly wait. Usagi makes it to America and finds Mamoru's apartment. The girls get so caught up in their life of normalcy that they do not notice when the new and very strong enemy approaches and attacks, let alone notice Usagi is no where to be seen.  

On a note: Maybe we should remove the mentioning of Chibiusa & the Outers from the summary in general since you indicate it will be only Inners in the storyline Wink Totally up to you though. ♥️


Note about Details:
I do not mean in any way to be knit picky, but can you clean up your additional detail summary a bit? You can use the way I cleaned up your regular summary as a guide. This is your story line application, therefor it should be straight and to the point, instead of """maybe this... oh and..." Wink  If you need help cleaning up the detail but, please let me know Smile




Overall, this idea is highly creative and I can picture all the girls suddenly going... LIKE OMGZZZ WHERE DID USAGI GO?!

 A New Beginning (Relaxed RP) 1023433532 

And Ami is all like... OH NO I DIDN'T REALIZE... and Rei is all like... I HATE YOU USAGI!

 A New Beginning (Relaxed RP) 1644003999 

Sorry.. I am fan girling here 

 :bunnykonataeye
sorry i just saw this. I can go clean it up, if anyone shows interst if not then I will let this baby go.
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PostSubject: Re: A New Beginning (Relaxed RP)   A New Beginning (Relaxed RP) I_icon_minitime17th June 2014, 2:37 pm

--Moved to graveyard--
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