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 Advanced Knight - Jack Levan (Cerberus)

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PostSubject: Advanced Knight - Jack Levan (Cerberus)   Advanced Knight - Jack Levan (Cerberus) I_icon_minitime2nd September 2018, 10:47 am

Character Name: Jack Levan

Gender: Male

Age and Date of Birth: April 5th - 16 years old
 
Used Canons: In the Anime and Crystal forms of the series
 
Appearance: He's 5'7 and 175 lbs, but has a more Caucasian color to him, having a few tan lines thanks to the Texan weather. He is slim, having a bit of a chub on himelf. He has brown, straight hair and hazel eyes. He usually wears a white shirt with a brown set of pants, with a cowboy hat. He has a bit of a big nose and average sized ears too.

Around his body, he doesn't have any outstanding scars to memorize. He does have muscle around his arms and legs, having hair on his legs and a wee bit onto his arms. He does have a little scar on the side of his forehead, due to a accident when he was a kid. He's well facially structured, much like an average teenager- however having a wee bit of wrinkles in the eyes due to the subsequent night patrols he does as Cerberus. There's even a rumor that he even now has one or 2 strands of grey hair. Either from the school work, pressure from the Levan. Co group or just from being Cerberus entirely.

Personality: Jack is outspoken, more so than his mother. If there is a problem that needs to be addressed or even daring to offend him, he will say it to your face. He is supportive, helping to clean around the house with Jenkins, his butler, or with any other task. He does have one glaring weak point- he does have a bit of a temper. Insult him or hurt him (not in a playful way) will give you the grand prize of either a mouthful or a earful. It's something he's been trying to check, even in his hero form. Overall, he is quite friendly. 

Subsequently after his mom's death, he holds his friends and remaining family dearly; especially when he's in his Cerberus form. And even fighting tooth and nail to help his friend, even giving out money to those who need it the most. He is however shy when it comes to telling all that he is a heir of a rich company, not wanting to be an advantage to the other people. He would rather give out the money rather than boast about it.

Any Unique Abilities/Skills: Jack has more abilities when it comes to business. If it's a deal or a problem he sees, he can fix it or make something of it. He gets it due to watching his mother when she was the CEO of Levan Co. Other than that, he doesn't have any unique abilities to speak of. Ever since becoming Cerberus, he has been taking his education more into self defence. Since he's dealing with criminals and other kinds of inhuman beings, he needed hand to hand skills. He's been trained in boxing, kick boxing, judo, nujitsu and jujutsu.
 
History: Life has not been so good for Jack. Jack Levan is the only heir to the rich Levan Co, a company that is known for drilling oil sights, natural gas, and now trying to slowly turn to solar panels. His father left him as a baby, only for his mother, Thallasa to tend to him, along with her butler Jenkins. Jack grew under close observation from both, only to wish him to have the best of life of what family he had left. When he turned 15, he went to his private school like he usually does, only to be picked up by Jenkins quickly after a hour. His mother was found dead, her car exploding outside the Levan Co building in Texas. No leads, no trails. He went into a deep depression, lasting several months. Even with Jenkins on the sidelines, there was still no comfort. His family, gone. Now the only heir, he had now more pressure on being this perfect heir. The pressure was getting way too much. He was suppose to be perfect for the job; but he wasn't. One day,  he was walking down school and then suddenly encountered a golden watch, having roman numerals. After following his day and was about to sleep, the watch began to glow for him. Shocked and confused, Jack walked down to see, only to his surprise that the watch was also talking. It introduced himself as Xervius, an AI being that was looking for him. He was studying Jack for a very long time, and had traits of a warrior that died eons ago; a few years after the Moon Kingdom's destruction. Unfortunately it did not know much due corrupt data. However, he had power to transform Jack into Cerberus, a Knight of Darkness and Revenge. 

It wasn't long till Jack put his new form into action. He used it against some bandits who were trying to rob a bank. They were armed with AR-15s and handguns. Thanks to some early self defense training, he was able to dispatch all of them in a quick amount of time. It gave him a rush, an adrenaline rush. He loved it. It wasn't long that Cerberus began taking down more criminals, even taking down a local Cartel group. He began to be well feared, and many of the folk began to call him "El Perro." Aka, The Dog. A year has passed and now with Jenkins being in the loop, he now usually patrols at night And now with each new battle, it grows more confidence into him, making him almost unstoppable. He still has to remind himself that he has 1 glaring weak spot. He was still human.

Other Noteworthy Facts: He doesn't love bragging that he's the heir of a million dollar company.
 
Storyline Specific Information: 

It's been 2 years after the last events from Sailor Stars. Sailor Moon saving the world once more from a intergalactic threat. Tokyo is trying to rebuild after Galaxia's destruction.

However, at the other side of the world in the western hemisphere, people are really taking notice of Sailor Moon. If one has the power, why not another? In the US, a black ops group is made to turn the magic of hers, into weapons, even creating soldiers for the armies in the world. It's their objective, and they'll do any to get it, even if they have to hurt people to do so. They are led by one person, a man named Zion. With limitless money, anyone or anything can be disposable. With what they can do, they can even make their own form of demons too.

Meanwhile, as the Star Seeds began to reform into their own forms, the Sailor Animates are resurrected in the US, only to find them working for Zion. They had no clue what their past lives were when they were brainwashed by Galaxia, thinking they can redeem themselves with working with this black ops group. Plus, with them far away from Tokyo; they can be under the radar.

However, where they're operating is in Texas, where my character lives, inside of Houston. He's aware of the Senshi in Tokyo, but is not aware of the Black Ops group, or the Animates. He's outnumbered, and out gunned. But if he tries to bring the Animates back to the light, he could stand a chance.




 

Senshi Information

 
Knight Name: Cerberus


Realm(s) of Influence: Earth Kindom (formerly), Independent, Moon Kingdom


Henshin/Transformation Phrase: His transformation item is his watch, Xervius, in which he pushes the watch when his icon (a pair of 3 dogs looking at the same area) begins flashing. In his transformation, Jack raises his fist  as a black aura then launches itself up and turn into six separate piece, going to each part of his body. His arms, legs, body and head. His arm in the air is first, transforming it with part of his sweater, arm guard and glove. He then looks at his other arm as it too is turned, clutching his fist. His body then is changed when the aura hits him, making a flash. As his feet transform into the jeans and shin guards, he stomps his left foot, seeing if both were in place. Lastly, the head. As it flashes too on his head, his eyes are open and his mask covers the majority of his mouth and nose. He crosses his arms and gives a deathly glare in the complete process. Jack is no more, but Cerberus has risen.


Senshi Fuku: As Cerberus, he has a different uniform of course. His original form did have a bit of a tuxedo form. But seeing Jack was going against criminals, he needed something more modern, and not flashy. He has a grey sweater like coat, having a hood. His pants are blue jeans, having shin guards that looked like it came from a soccer group. He does have leather gloves on him, arm guards to protect his arms from physical attacks and a black plastic mask to cover his mouth area. However, he does have a Type 3 bullet proof vest on him to protect himself from rifle rounds, shotgun shells and handguns- seeing he faced many criminals with one form of gun. He had been shot one time, but it was blocked thanks to the vests he used.


Powers: Besides his self defense skills, he doesn't have any powers at first, more like enhance abilities. However, later in said story, he would have a weapon of his own to call.



  • 1. Shadow Enhansement- This move is neutral and is more of a enhanced ability. While in the darkness, like a corner of a shadow, dark rooms, etc, his strength is increased slightly. He can move a lot faster too thanks to it as well. However, with more experience, he begins to even turn into a shadow himself, making him  even phase in and out, or even teleport too. There is one huge weakness to the power- if exposed to light, he becomes slower.



  • 2. Enlighten Blade- After rubbing the blade once, his Star Blade begins to glow a white color. This is used to kill or purge out demons that are inside people. The victim would not get killed in the process, just get woozy.



  • 3. Ultimate Slash- Similar to Enlighten Blade, it too glows when he rubs the blade. However, he can  simply swing the blade and a crescent moon like slash. As it moves, it can go though metals, trees, and through people.




  • 4. Gravity Storm- His bacon of moves, Cerberus can swing this to his opponent like a baseball. It's form is a pitch black, basketball sized ball with lightning  scorching in the middle and sides. Upon contact is when it's pretty fatal. That ball that he threw, it's a black hole. It can literally suck the enemy inside the ball, only to make a small flash of energy after all is done. It'll only suck for at least a few seconds until the opponent is inside. He uses this move very rarely and will not use it if anyone is in the way, because of how powerful this is.



Weapons or Magical Items:


  • 1. Star Blade- A weapon that Cerberus gets a little bit later in his career, it is strapped on the left side of his hip. It's double edged, having a tip on the side of the blade to hook onto things. It has a X strapped guard, red in color. It's less wider on the top, but more on the bottom. It also has a small blade underneath the handle. It's around 3 and a half feet tall. It can also, in later form, can turn itself into a form of chains, with blades on it. As a whip, or to grab onto stuff, it can do it all. It can also stretch out double if not triple it's length.



Guardian: Xervius, his watch. He's more for guidance and moral support.
 
RP Sample:

Houston, Texas. It was in the night hours with the moon shining brightly in the sky. The stars couldn't be found because of how much light the buildings were emitting. Most of the people in the city were sleeping, and some doing the night shift to either keep this city running or to protect it. 

For one, it was a usual patrol, up until almost 11 PM.

A young man was sitting on top, in uniform incase any kind of danger was on the horizon. In jeans, s sweater and having a mask to cover his mouth and nose. He had his hood up too, his face enshrouded in a shadow. His hazel eyes were the only thing you could see at the moment. Why he was like this? 

He was in a "super hero" like costume. A Knight for the people. Cerberus he was called. But many nick name him "El Perro". The Dog. He was taking a huge bite of the criminal activity, yanking it and pulling it out. The local Cartels dispised him because of it, shutting down their operations and kicking the butt out of their subordinates.


As of now, he was just yawning away, almost being 11 o clock. 


"Man, I'm tired." He complained, rubbing his head in a itch.

"You have 5 minutes, Jack. You're fine." His watch told him. "Aren't you gonna think on where to eat next?"

"Na, too tired for that. Jenkin's pizza really got me there." the boy replied, patting his stomach. "I'm having it for lunch, breakfast and dinner tomorrow." He grinned under his mask. "Got lots of school work to do tomorrow too."

"
Did you do your algebra 1 questions?" Questioned Xervius. 

Jack rolled his eyes in return. "You were on me, Xer. Come on, you're on my wrist the whole-"

He stopped as he suddenly heard gunshots coming from a distance, with a car speeding up on the side. 2 police cars were persuing them as they past Cerberus and the building. 

His eyes stared, going into a glare. "Looks like it's gonna have to wait."


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PostSubject: Re: Advanced Knight - Jack Levan (Cerberus)   Advanced Knight - Jack Levan (Cerberus) I_icon_minitime2nd September 2018, 12:44 pm

ready to be approved my good sirs. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Advanced Knight - Jack Levan (Cerberus)   Advanced Knight - Jack Levan (Cerberus) I_icon_minitime2nd September 2018, 9:40 pm

Hi and welcome to the forums! XD

I'm Uranus, and I'll be reviewing your profile today. Rather than giving you a few things to work on at a time, I'm going to outline everything I'd need to see before accepting this as an Approved profile! Let's start!

  1. Formatting: Your profile is filled with a lot of different font sizes and colors; please fix this!
  2. Title: Please modify the topic title to fit the guidelines outlined in this post.
  3. Age and Date of Birth: Please include the character's age for ease of access.
  4. Appearance: Good start! However, for advanced profiles we require at least two paragraphs of information; please add more detail to fit this requirement.
  5. Personality: Once again, good start! However, as with appearance, two paragraphs of information is the standard to be met for Advanced profiles; please expand!
  6. Any Unique Abilities/Skills: Could you rephrase "taking the don for Cerberus" for clarity?
  7. In the History section there are a few quick fixes:
    Quote :
    Even with Jenkins on the side, there was still no comfort [...] Now the only heir, he found to be in a tighter watch than he usually was. [...] One day, he was walking to school [...] with roman numerals. [...] 
    [...] A year has passed and Jenkins being in the loop, He usually patrols at night
    bold  = quick fix; bold+italics = please rephrase for clarity.
  8. Powers: Please use the list function to tidy up the powers list!
  9. Weapons / Magical Items: Same for this section!


Once again, rather than a starting point the above is everything I need to see updated/corrected before I can accept this as an Advanced character profile. You are free to update as many times as you need to meet the standards - simply fix a section (no need to bold or change the font color for me, I'll recheck everything) and post "Ready for review" again so I know to take another look. I'll respond with additional guidance if needed or accept the profile if all problems are addressed!

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PostSubject: Re: Advanced Knight - Jack Levan (Cerberus)   Advanced Knight - Jack Levan (Cerberus) I_icon_minitime3rd September 2018, 5:32 pm

ok, I did what you said. Ready to be reviewed once more!
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PostSubject: Re: Advanced Knight - Jack Levan (Cerberus)   Advanced Knight - Jack Levan (Cerberus) I_icon_minitime5th September 2018, 4:31 pm

Ok! Going off of my original "to-do" list, with green being done and red being not done (and default color meaning please read on afterwards) we've got:
Sailor Uranus wrote:

  1. Formatting: Your profile is filled with a lot of different font sizes and colors; please fix this!
  2. Title: Please modify the topic title to fit the guidelines outlined in this post.
  3. Age and Date of Birth: Please include the character's age for ease of access.
  4. Appearance: Good start! However, for advanced profiles we require at least two paragraphs of information; please add more detail to fit this requirement.
  5. Personality: Once again, good start! However, as with appearance, two paragraphs of information is the standard to be met for Advanced profiles; please expand!
  6. Any Unique Abilities/Skills: Could you rephrase "taking the don for Cerberus" for clarity?
  7. In the History section there are a few quick fixes:
    Quote :
    Even with Jenkins on the side, there was still no comfort [...] Now the only heir, he found to be in a tighter watch than he usually was. [...] One day, he was walking to school [...] with roman numerals. [...] 
    [...] A year has passed and Jenkins being in the loop, He usually patrols at night
    bold  = quick fix; bold+italics = please rephrase for clarity.
    Additional Fix found today, 9/5/2018: 
    Quote :
     He was supposed to be perfect for the job [...]  It introduced himself as Xervius
    the last one has conflicting pronouns, just pick one version and you'll be fine. 
  8. Powers: Please use the list function to tidy up the powers list!
  9. Weapons / Magical Items: Same for this section!

Rereading I found a few "quick fixes" in History that will need to be addressed to meet the Advanced Standard and have added them in to #7 above; in addition, while I appreciate that you expanded to make both the appearance and personality sections to two paragraphs, each with 3 - 4 short sentences per paragraph, for an advanced profile I would like to see more than just the basics. While what you have for appearance gives a good general checklist, I'd like to get a feel for him through his looks and a feel for your descriptive writing through the way you present this first field of the profile. Consider drawing out the short sentences into more of a flow from one sentence to the next, dropping the traits off like a friendly introduction rather than blocks on a fact sheet. If you'd like some examples, I encourage you to check out the help-page attached to the submission form or checking out the approved advanced profiles made by our senior rp members (whose identities can be found here).


When you've addressed the above in your profile, please post "ready for review" again and I'll give it another look!

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PostSubject: Re: Advanced Knight - Jack Levan (Cerberus)   Advanced Knight - Jack Levan (Cerberus) I_icon_minitime6th September 2018, 6:57 pm

ok, I tried once more on the editing and did the best I could. However, when trying to enlarging the font on " Other Noteworthy Facts:"   I couldn't able to enlarge the size of it for some odd reason. It's not on my end, so I apologize. And I did my best to explain a bit more about my character and add more editing onto my character's history. Let me know if there's more problems. Thanks!
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PostSubject: Re: Advanced Knight - Jack Levan (Cerberus)   Advanced Knight - Jack Levan (Cerberus) I_icon_minitime7th September 2018, 2:45 pm

Thank you! We're almost there!
Sailor Uranus wrote:
  1. Formatting: Your profile is filled with a lot of different font sizes and colors; please fix this!

Starman92 wrote:
ok, I tried once more on the editing and did the best I could. However, when trying to enlarging the font on " Other Noteworthy Facts:"   I couldn't able to enlarge the size of it for some odd reason. It's not on my end, so I apologize. And I did my best to explain a bit more about my character and add more editing onto my character's history. Let me know if there's more problems. Thanks!
Oh! XD I think you're working with the default post editing mode - WYSIWYG (What You See Is What You Get); when you edit the post, hit the little piece of paper icon at the end (('switch editor mode')) and it will show the code that is controlling the post. Anytime you see the following:
Code:
[size=#] wordswordswords [/size]
Just delete the size codes and it will return to the default size!

Once that's cleaned up, you'll be good to go! Respond "Ready for review" and I'll do the final check!

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Ok I think I got it! Ready!
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