Character Name:  Nyanko Suzu (Sailor Tin Nyanko)
Gender: Female
Age and Date of Birth: Unknown, assumed to be in late teens/early twenties

Used Canons: Used in the original anime version

Appearance: She is somewhat below height and is in average weight. She has caucasian-like skin, and has 2 long and braided pony tails. The hair is of a black color. Her eyes are a golden color, but her pupils are unique. They look more somewhat of a cat. Her nails are a bit long, almost looking sharp like. Clothing wise, however is different. She prefers to wear dresses or uniforms, prefering the color yellow on most. She'd rather have tighter dresses or uniforms that doesn't expose much. For her school uniform, she would wear a black shirt with a white, sleeved shirt. Much like for obsession for yellow, her collar has a small yellow tie. She also has one bracelet on her arm.

Personality:   She is a huge fan of sea food, from shrimp to fish; she can eat it all, and with passion too. Being nice, however is the last thing in her mind. In fact, she is cruel and cold- making one reason on how Sailor Aluminum Siren and Sailor Lead Crow got killed. One was by harassing Siren by getting her to confess that she found the Star Seed, but wasn't able to get it. This caused Galaxia to kill Siren. For Lead Crow, Tin fired energy from her bracelets to wound her, making her drop a vile that had a black hole, killing her quickly. She is also very calculating- making it such when she finally got the leading operation position by Galaxia. In total, she loves power, and will do absolutely anything to get it, even killing the ones on top to do so. Originally Tin Nyanko wasn't all bad after Moon healed her. It was assumed that her, along with Galaxia and her Senshi; weren't bad at all at one point. So maybe she has some good in her after all.


Any Unique Abilities/Skills: Due to her cat-like eyes, it wouldn't be a surprise to have more awareness- well, like a cat! She can be more flexible than other people, able to bend in more uncomfortable positions. She can jump much higher than average humans, and unusually can see more better in the dark too.

History: Before now, Tin Nyanko was a scout for Galaxia's Senshi. Corrupt thanks to Chaos and under tight will, she helped please her master by helping take the star seeds from multiple planets and systems- killing all without mercy. Everything was doing well... until the Senshi came to earth. While Lead Crow and Aluminum Siren struggled to find the senshi and grab the real star seed, Tin began manipulating the duo, mentally and physically. For Aluminum Siren, it was more on harassment, making her lose her cool more than once. One was fatal after arguing with her WHILE in front of Galaxia about the star seed on where it was. Siren stated she couldn't find it thanks to so many senshi around. Tin countered that she did, and with that, Siren blurred it out that she did. It was well enough to make Galaxia remove Siren from the scene, removing her bracelets and killing her. With one down and one to go, Tin Nyanko did the same thing with Lead Crow. When Lead Crow finally was about to get the star seed from Sailor Moon, Tin yet again intervened with a physical attack from her bracelets, wounding Lead Crow, and dropping a vile that contained a black hole. The black hole killed Lead Crow, crushing her to death and stretching her once inside. But now as the boss on getting the star seed, this was now her chance to get her glory.

Well not so much. After her first encounter from Sailor Moon, she was able to heal half of Tin, exposing much of her good and trustworthy personality. This was nothing that was not seen of her eons ago. On the otherside, her other half was trying to get the star seed. As Galaxia noticed this, Tin Nyanko became a liability, much like the rest of her senshi. Galaxia eventually had enough of her; and in front of the Sailor Senshi, removed Tin Nyanko's remaining bracelet, killing instantly.

Other Noteworthy Facts: NA

Storyline Specific Information: (Operation Sailor Soldier) - It's been 2 years after the last events from Sailor Stars. Sailor Moon saving the world once more from a intergalactic threat. Tokyo is trying to rebuild after Galaxia's destruction.

However, at the other side of the world in the western hemisphere, people are really taking notice of Sailor Moon. If one has the power, why not another? In the US, a black ops group is made to turn the magic of hers, into weapons, even creating soldiers for the armies in the world. It's their objective, and they'll do any to get it, even if they have to hurt people to do so. They are led by one person, a man named Zion. With limitless money, anyone or anything can be disposable. With what they can do, they can even make their own form of demons too.

Meanwhile, as the Star Seeds began to reform into their own forms, the Sailor Animates are resurrected in the US, only to find them working for Zion. They had no clue what their past lives were when they were brainwashed by Galaxia, thinking they can redeem themselves with working with this black ops group. Plus, with them far away from Tokyo; they can be under the radar.

However, where they're operating is in Texas, where my character lives, inside of Houston. He's aware of the Senshi in Tokyo, but is not aware of the Black Ops group, or the Animates. He's outnumbered, and out gunned. But if he tries to bring the Animates back to the light, he could stand a chance.

Source: Sailor Moon Wiki


Senshi Name: Sailor Tin Nyanko
Realm(s) of Influence: Galaxia Senshi, Black Ops
Henshin/Transformation Phrase: "Tin Nyanko Power, Make Up!"
Senshi Fuku:  Tin wears a black leather suit covers most of her body parts, including the  arms, chest and head. She also has a headpiece has cat ears and strands hanging down from them, small, thin braids, framing her face with her golden eyes. She has a collar, a bow and a choker, reminding that of a sailor fuku. Along her chest and stomach, the choker and on the headpiece she has small bells, but the most transparent is the one on her collar bone, being able to jingle out of most of the bells. Tin also has a set of grey panty hose on both sets of legs with black bands on them. She has also on a long cat tail, colored black  in pattern with her uniform. Her tail is moveable, able to sway or grab onto stuff.
Powers: Her powers are more of a cat, as enlisted earlier.  She can be more flexible than other people, able to bend in more uncomfortable positions. She can jump much higher than average humans, and unusually can see more better in the dark too. She no longer has the bracelets on her wrists.

Weapons or Magical Items:

• Cat Paw Gun- Tin's weapon of choice is a bit of a blaster, known as the Cat Paw Gun. This weapon can fire large blasts of energy towards targets and can cause huge explosions upon contact. The weapon is as almost tall as her, and needs 2 hands in order to fire.
  
  
• Bracelets- These were attached to her wrists and keep her from dying after her star seed was taken. She can use these to fire energy at other people, to rob people of their star seed.
  
  

Guardian: None at the moment.

RP Sample:
"Director Morgan!" Tin chimed out in full uniform, making a small bow to the new director in charge, offering him the folders from various cases and missions.
"Miss Nyanko." Morgan said in a simple manner, taking the folders gently in her grasp. "I see you are all ready for work."
"Oh yes!" She looked up, making a smile. "I'm ready to help you with your energy raids. We will make sure we get back in track to please Mr. Zion once more.
"We will. Just it's gonna be questionable on how. Operation Pyramid has already begun." Morgan explained. "Zion has made poor excuses on your people betraying us. Losing all of you would be hard to come by. Tell me." He said, looking sharply to her eyes as they walk down. "Think you can take down all 3 and that Cerberus?"
"If I remember, I did take down 2 of them before." She replied, smiling in a cold-like fashion. "So if I can take em down then, I'll take em down whenever you want." She said, her arms going behind her back as her bells jingle from each walk they made. Although it was not as loud, but it was present.
"Good. I'd hate to lose you. When you find those 3 girls in school, you will do your best to eliminate them WITHOUT. Without. Using any kind of weaponry. Nobody betrays Zion and lives to tell." Morgan replied, a finger up in the air. "You will do what you are told or be replaced."
"I assure you, I won't be any of those... traitors." Tin replied coldly, looking back to Morgan. "I promise it on my life." She proudly said. "I will rip them ear to ear."
"Good. Now let's going. We got a mission to fly to."

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Oh! I thought it would be fine as is. Oh well! I'll turn it to advanced when I can! Thanks!

It is now editededed and ready!

Okay! First off, please use double space to separate your paragraphs for easier reading (For example, in Appearance, the paragraph that starts with 'Clothing wise' should be another space down. Same with the History section).

I found the following typos! Running them through spell check should really help with fixing all of them:
- orignal anime
- her pupels are unique
- her nails (should be capitalized since it's the start of a sentence)
- She perfers to wear more into dresses... perfering the color yellow... white sleved in shirt.
- There's a stray ] at the start of the Personality section
- Infact are two words and should be separated
- Either by manipulation or by physical - this is not a standalone sentence and should probably linked with the previous one
- It would'nt be surprise to have... flexable... unusualy can see more better in the dark
- ...please her master by help
- manulpulating the duo, mentaly...
- braclets
- otherside - two words
- ramaining braclet
- There's another stray ] at the beginning of the senshi fuku section

Please include the Galactica Bracelets as part of her Weapons/Magical items and her ability to extract people's star seeds under her Powers (you can delete the rest of the Powers section since you already wrote them under Unique Abilities).

For Advanced profiles, we typically ask that you flesh things out more, especially for Personality. Please elaborate on her manipulative side; how did she manipulate Siren and Crow? Show examples of the traits you mentioned by using scenes shown in the anime (how do we know she loves power and pleasing her masters? How do we know she's cold and cruel?)

Edited and ready!

You still have the following typos:
- does'nt expose much (Appearance)
- Infact (Personality)
- Corupt
- manulpulating the duo, mentaly 
- intervined
- streatching 
- otherside
- ramaining braclet (All under History)
- flexable, unusualy, braclets (Powers section)
- Morgain, fasion, elimiate (RP sample)

Can you note as well in the Personality section that she isn't all bad originally because after Sailor Moon attempted to heal her, she becomes torn into a good half and bad half, suggesting before Galaxia she may have been a good person?

Thank you!

Edited and ready!

I'm sorry, I still don't see the requested change in the Personality section that I asked for in my previous post.

Also, you should label this profile Antagonist instead of Senshi.

Edited as asked!

Approved.