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Moonlight Dreaming Lotus Crystal
Title : ----tv static---- Posts : 394 Join date : 2017-05-08 Age : 23 Location : Detroit
| Subject: [Critique] Trying something new 31st May 2017, 12:23 pm | |
| I never worked with Eternal Sailor Moon (90s) in a graphic before, so I've tried to make something new. What are your thoughts on this? |
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CrystalBunny Lotus Crystal
Posts : 1446 Join date : 2016-07-28 Age : 20
| Subject: Re: [Critique] Trying something new 31st May 2017, 12:38 pm | |
| It surely looks good but I would suggest on using a higher-quality image since that one looks pretty old and pixelated. |
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Moonlight Dreaming Lotus Crystal
Title : ----tv static---- Posts : 394 Join date : 2017-05-08 Age : 23 Location : Detroit
| Subject: Re: [Critique] Trying something new 31st May 2017, 1:01 pm | |
| - CrystalBunny wrote:
- It surely looks good but I would suggest on using a higher-quality image since that one looks pretty old and pixelated.
Oh no, the eternal sailor moon image was sharpened and adjusted. (if that's whats you're talking about) |
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Diana Inner Senshi Admin Graphics Director
Title : Ally-Cat ♡ॢ₍⸍⸌̣ʷ̣̫⸍̣⸌₎. Wolf-sissy to yunbuns. ♥ Posts : 3314 Join date : 2014-12-17 Location : Central Europe
| Subject: Re: [Critique] Trying something new 31st May 2017, 1:23 pm | |
| Exactly! And that what might be significant fort the future: Sharpening. The render you chose is lovely, however, attempt sharpening it smoother in order to prevent making it look oversharpened. Regarding the saturation, I too would suggest to 'ease out the colors' or rather playing gentle with colors . For the text I would not scale it vertical-ish, instead, I would keep it horizontal. Apart from that, a very lovely signature! Looking forward to more! |
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Moonlight Dreaming Lotus Crystal
Title : ----tv static---- Posts : 394 Join date : 2017-05-08 Age : 23 Location : Detroit
| Subject: Re: [Critique] Trying something new 31st May 2017, 3:36 pm | |
| Here's the new image! And got it @Diana! |
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Diana Inner Senshi Admin Graphics Director
Title : Ally-Cat ♡ॢ₍⸍⸌̣ʷ̣̫⸍̣⸌₎. Wolf-sissy to yunbuns. ♥ Posts : 3314 Join date : 2014-12-17 Location : Central Europe
| Subject: Re: [Critique] Trying something new 1st June 2017, 7:35 am | |
| - Moonlight Dreaming wrote:
Here's the new image! And got it @Diana! Now I actually think it's too less colored (lol). I played with the colors myself and this is what I was attempting to achieve with my recommendations: I adjusted the lightning and played with my Scratchpad ^^. If I say 'horizontal', it doesn't mean you have to make it the same size, the same font etc. merely not vertical XD Besides the coloring and text-adjustments, I still think the sharpening needs to be adjusted as well. But perhaps it was the render itself who's plainly sophisticating to sharpen :/. |
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Moonlight Dreaming Lotus Crystal
Title : ----tv static---- Posts : 394 Join date : 2017-05-08 Age : 23 Location : Detroit
| Subject: Re: [Critique] Trying something new 1st June 2017, 3:02 pm | |
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Sailor Venus Inner Senshi Admin Media Director
Title : AKA Haine~ the official hardcore UsaxMamo fan Posts : 3584 Join date : 2012-09-24 Age : 37 Location : The Echanted forest looking for my unicorn pet
| Subject: Re: [Critique] Trying something new 1st June 2017, 5:49 pm | |
| Last one is way better tbh! the other ones had too much sharpen on it and looked a bit odd :/ Good job!! your graphic style is really good! =D |
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Diana Inner Senshi Admin Graphics Director
Title : Ally-Cat ♡ॢ₍⸍⸌̣ʷ̣̫⸍̣⸌₎. Wolf-sissy to yunbuns. ♥ Posts : 3314 Join date : 2014-12-17 Location : Central Europe
| Subject: Re: [Critique] Trying something new 1st June 2017, 10:44 pm | |
| No problem at all, I mean, I solely suggested the concept for you to re-make . Really like the result! And as VBabe already said; I really like your graphic style! Keep up the great work! |
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Moonlight Dreaming Lotus Crystal
Title : ----tv static---- Posts : 394 Join date : 2017-05-08 Age : 23 Location : Detroit
| Subject: Re: [Critique] Trying something new 2nd June 2017, 6:17 am | |
| Thank you both. This is pretty enough to go in my premades thread xD. |
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