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PostSubject: [Critique] Trying something new   [Critique] Trying something new I_icon_minitime31st May 2017, 12:23 pm

I never worked with Eternal Sailor Moon (90s) in a graphic before, so I've tried to make something new. What are your thoughts on this?

[Critique] Trying something new DF73thb
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PostSubject: Re: [Critique] Trying something new   [Critique] Trying something new I_icon_minitime31st May 2017, 12:38 pm

It surely looks good but I would suggest on using a higher-quality image since that one looks pretty old and pixelated.
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PostSubject: Re: [Critique] Trying something new   [Critique] Trying something new I_icon_minitime31st May 2017, 1:01 pm

CrystalBunny wrote:
It surely looks good but I would suggest on using a higher-quality image since that one looks pretty old and pixelated.
Oh no, the eternal sailor moon image was sharpened and adjusted. (if that's whats you're talking about)
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PostSubject: Re: [Critique] Trying something new   [Critique] Trying something new I_icon_minitime31st May 2017, 1:23 pm

Exactly! And that what might be significant fort the future: Sharpening. The render you chose is lovely, however, attempt sharpening it smoother in order to prevent making it look oversharpened.

Regarding the saturation, I too would suggest to 'ease out the colors' or rather playing gentle with colors Smile. For the text I would not scale it vertical-ish, instead, I would keep it horizontal.

Apart from that, a very lovely signature! Looking forward to more!
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PostSubject: Re: [Critique] Trying something new   [Critique] Trying something new I_icon_minitime31st May 2017, 3:36 pm

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Here's the new image! And got it @Diana!
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PostSubject: Re: [Critique] Trying something new   [Critique] Trying something new I_icon_minitime1st June 2017, 7:35 am

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[Critique] Trying something new VYnp5xP

Here's the new image! And got it @Diana!

Now I actually think it's too less colored (lol). I played with the colors myself and this is what I was attempting to achieve with my recommendations:

[Critique] Trying something new ZanQ98w

I adjusted the lightning and played with my Scratchpad ^^. If I say 'horizontal', it doesn't mean you have to make it the same size, the same font etc. merely not vertical XD

Besides the coloring and text-adjustments, I still think the sharpening needs to be adjusted as well. But perhaps it was the render itself who's plainly sophisticating to sharpen :/.
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PostSubject: Re: [Critique] Trying something new   [Critique] Trying something new I_icon_minitime1st June 2017, 3:02 pm

Diana wrote:
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[Critique] Trying something new VYnp5xP

Here's the new image! And got it @Diana!

Now I actually think it's too less colored (lol). I played with the colors myself and this is what I was attempting to achieve with my recommendations:

[Critique] Trying something new ZanQ98w

I adjusted the lightning and played with my Scratchpad ^^. If I say 'horizontal', it doesn't mean you have to make it the same size, the same font etc. merely not vertical XD

Besides the coloring and text-adjustments, I still think the sharpening needs to be adjusted as well. But perhaps it was the render itself who's plainly sophisticating to sharpen :/.

[Critique] Trying something new FWST8wn

I (slightly) remade the signature (its kinda similar to yours but it looks good, I mean if you're okay with that), changed the sharpening, and fixed the colors a bit.
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PostSubject: Re: [Critique] Trying something new   [Critique] Trying something new I_icon_minitime1st June 2017, 5:49 pm

Last one is way better tbh! the other ones had too much sharpen on it and looked a bit odd :/
Good job!! your graphic style is really good! =D
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PostSubject: Re: [Critique] Trying something new   [Critique] Trying something new I_icon_minitime1st June 2017, 10:44 pm

No problem at all, I mean, I solely suggested the concept for you to re-make Razz.

Really like the result! And as VBabe already said; I really like your graphic style! Keep up the great work!
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PostSubject: Re: [Critique] Trying something new   [Critique] Trying something new I_icon_minitime2nd June 2017, 6:17 am

[Critique] Trying something new 2869872805 Thank you both. This is pretty enough to go in my premades thread xD.
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