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PostSubject: [Critique] Help with text   [Critique] Help with text I_icon_minitime11th July 2013, 8:10 pm

Hi guys! So I've been working on editing this pic and adding in some text but I'm just at a loss with what to do with the text. I'm not 100% sure about the placement and colors and just really need some advice on this one.  I've been staring at it and adjusting it for hours but I don't know what to do. I'm tempted to scrap the whole thing. 
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PostSubject: Re: [Critique] Help with text   [Critique] Help with text I_icon_minitime11th July 2013, 11:08 pm

If you're using Photoshop, you can download styles. They help me out a lot with text presets.
I acually like the text and placement. I like the mixing of fonts you've got too. The bottom font might also look awesome in a curly cursive font.
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PostSubject: Re: [Critique] Help with text   [Critique] Help with text I_icon_minitime12th July 2013, 7:49 am

I think the text on top should be a bit smaller, and maybe uppercase? it'd probably look better ^^ The fonts choice and the color totally work for me, they fit really well with the picture <3
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PostSubject: Re: [Critique] Help with text   [Critique] Help with text I_icon_minitime12th July 2013, 8:41 am

I would say to make the text a lot smaller and maybe lower the opacity a tad bit to make it softer Smile Keep the placement and font and like Senshi said maybe make the text uppercase ^^ But if you make it smaller and softer than it'll give it the appearance that she is thinking the quote instead of it just being a quote on a picture ^^ In my opinion it would tie up the graphic well ^^
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PostSubject: Re: [Critique] Help with text   [Critique] Help with text I_icon_minitime12th July 2013, 9:36 am

Thanks so much for the advise guys!! I lowered the opacity a bit and made the text smaller.  I also made the upper text uppercase. 
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 I think it looks a lot better!
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