Title : Dubbed the Official Second Usagi/Bunny ^^and Official Anzamoon Posts : 2817 Join date : 2012-07-19 Age : 28
Subject: [Critique] Help with text 11th July 2013, 8:10 pm
Hi guys! So I've been working on editing this pic and adding in some text but I'm just at a loss with what to do with the text. I'm not 100% sure about the placement and colors and just really need some advice on this one. I've been staring at it and adjusting it for hours but I don't know what to do. I'm tempted to scrap the whole thing.
Title : GC's Official Leek & JunJun/Sailor Juno Posts : 3220 Join date : 2012-11-19 Age : 32 Location : In the Diamond Sky
Subject: Re: [Critique] Help with text 11th July 2013, 11:08 pm
If you're using Photoshop, you can download styles. They help me out a lot with text presets. I acually like the text and placement. I like the mixing of fonts you've got too. The bottom font might also look awesome in a curly cursive font.
yukine
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Posts : 1903 Join date : 2013-05-11
Subject: Re: [Critique] Help with text 12th July 2013, 7:49 am
I think the text on top should be a bit smaller, and maybe uppercase? it'd probably look better ^^ The fonts choice and the color totally work for me, they fit really well with the picture <3
mysteryloveandjustice
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Title : GC's Official Seiya/Sailor Star Fighter <3 Posts : 2849 Join date : 2012-09-25 Age : 30 Location : Amidst the ancient pines
Subject: Re: [Critique] Help with text 12th July 2013, 8:41 am
I would say to make the text a lot smaller and maybe lower the opacity a tad bit to make it softer Keep the placement and font and like Senshi said maybe make the text uppercase ^^ But if you make it smaller and softer than it'll give it the appearance that she is thinking the quote instead of it just being a quote on a picture ^^ In my opinion it would tie up the graphic well ^^
Luna Nova
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Title : Dubbed the Official Second Usagi/Bunny ^^and Official Anzamoon Posts : 2817 Join date : 2012-07-19 Age : 28
Subject: Re: [Critique] Help with text 12th July 2013, 9:36 am
Thanks so much for the advise guys!! I lowered the opacity a bit and made the text smaller. I also made the upper text uppercase.