Hey there! Aww poor Hotaru! Sounds like a sad RP, just in time for our September Blues theme xD

Could you edit the title of the thread? We like to keep things similarly formatted and easy to find! The title should be "[Status of the RP] RP title"

So for this RP's storyline submission, it should read: [Relaxed] Family Sticks Together

Also, you have mentioned Hotaru as a main character in the plot summary, but she is not listed in the Member to Character List! Could please add her to that list, unless you intend for her to be an NPC?

As an added note, (going on the assumption that Hotaru will be a played character) we ask that any RP with 5 or more characters have at least 3 players signed up before approval could be given. So either you can wait until you get a few more players and bump this thread to be approved again, or you can shorten the list of characters to be less than 5.

If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to ask!

This sounds like a good (yet sad) idea! I'll play haruka! Her profile is here.

Sailor Saturn wrote:

Hey there! Aww poor Hotaru! Sounds like a sad RP, just in time for our September Blues theme xD

Could you edit the title of the thread? We like to keep things similarly formatted and easy to find! The title should be "[Status of the RP] RP title"

So for this RP's storyline submission, it should read: [Relaxed] Family Sticks Together

Also, you have mentioned Hotaru as a main character in the plot summary, but she is not listed in the Member to Character List! Could please add her to that list, unless you intend for her to be an NPC?

As an added note, (going on the assumption that Hotaru will be a played character) we ask that any RP with 5 or more characters have at least 3 players signed up before approval could be given. So either you can wait until you get a few more players and bump this thread to be approved again, or you can shorten the list of characters to be less than 5.

If you have any questions,  please don't hesitate to ask!

i finished the edit and have 2 rpers interested 3 if you count me

Cosmos-Hime wrote:

This sounds like a good (yet sad) idea! I'll play haruka! Her profile is here.

Oh! Only the creators of the storyline and the reviewer should post in the Storyline Submissions, to keep things easier to get through the reviewing process! OOC boards are where any character claiming should go!

Though I'm going to bet this was a mistake and that this is the thread you meant to post in! xD

SaturnTomoe wrote:

i finished the edit and have 2 rpers interested 3 if you count me

Looks good! Since you now have three players, you may open up more characters slots if you wish, though!

I just have one question about the plot, something to help flesh it out a little more: Is this an Alternate Universe setting? Since, in Sailor Moon canon, Hotaru is essentially Michiru and Haruka's daughter, but from the summary is sounds to me like Haruka will be Hotaru's age and will be her best friend? I could be completely wrong xD Could you elaborate a little on that, just so we have a clearer idea about the world you are setting the RP in?

Thank you!

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SaturnTomoe wrote:

i finished the edit and have 2 rpers interested 3 if you count me

Looks good! Since you now have three players, you may open up more characters slots if you wish, though!

I just have one question about the plot, something to help flesh it out a little more: Is this an Alternate Universe setting? Since, in Sailor Moon canon, Hotaru is essentially Michiru and Haruka's daughter, but from the summary is sounds to me like Haruka will be Hotaru's age and will be her best friend? I could be completely wrong xD Could you elaborate a little on that, just so we have a clearer idea about the world you are setting the RP in?

Thank you!

 it's an AU and no, haruka is hotarus' adoptive father-figure but they are very close

Okay! =) Could you just elaborate a little more about the AU setting? I'm not sure it's mentioned in the summary, so I don't know much about it!

well, it starts at juuban elementary since she's chibiusas' friend and then it moves to her new house with haruka, michi, and setsuna

Okay so just to clarify: She's still a senshi and the senshi things (such as the Death Buster's season) have all happened? The AU is that she's getting bullied in school, then? I'm sorry, I'm just trying to get a better understanding about what makes it an AU! What has changed in this RP that is different from the general Sailor Moon canon?

yes and yes

Okay then!

I think everything looks complete =)

Approved!