How is this so far I want to edit it up a little later, is this the right place for it?


Name: Lilith of Darkness

Age: Unknown, Date of Birth: The Dawn of Mankind

Gender: Female

Race: Human

Birthplace: The Garden of Eden

Job: Magician

Appearance: A woman who appears as middleaged though she is remarkably older than that. Lilith tends to wear black robes very similar to those worn by Wiccans in ceremony. Lilith also adorns her hands and necks with beads and is rarely seen without her wooden staff which she uses to aid her in her black magic.



Hobbies/Occupations: Tarot Readings, Wiccan Festivals

Skills/Abilities: Black Magic

Personality: Usually quite reserved and cunning, she prefers to wait patiently before making a move. Though she has a tendency to convince people to do her work for her rather than actively doing it herself, however when the time comes she will use her powers at had to be victorious.

Biography/History: Created from the same mound of clay as Adam, Lilith was created to be his wife. Not understanding why she should be subordinate Lilith rejected Adam as her husband and as punishment by God, she was forced to give birth to one hundred children a day which were all killed. Soon enough Lilith attempting to drown herself in the Red Sea only to be saved by the fallen angel Samael, together their children became the demons of the Underworld. After hundreds of bitter years, Lilith befriended the werewolves and vampires and the other spirits on Earth hoping to use the power of Cain, Death Vulcan and Astarte to overthrow the Heavens and begin a new world of equality with herself as the Mother of that world. Lilith sent various associates to try to defeat the Sailor Senshi, during a sabbat banquet in Hungary, she trapped 6 of them in a magic square, though they were rescued b Sailor Astarte. Later Lilith successfully helped channel the power of Dark Cain through the body of Sailor Astarte. After Sailor Moon realized that Lilith was merely being controlled by Cain, Sailor Moon scolded Cain Astarte during their battle in the Promised Land saying that “this woman came from this land and she is your Mother” before purifying Lilith.

Likes/Dislikes: Doesn't have much time for such things

Weaknesses/Strengths: Strengths: Magic and Charisma. Weaknesses: Light Magic, Children

Quote:”The goddess Madonna shall be faithfully revered”

Dream(s): To be a Mother

Family: None

Other Noteworthy Facts: Purified by Sailor Moon



Guardian:

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Knight/Guardian Name and Title: Lilith of Darkness

Realm of Influence(s):Black Magic

Items: Magic Staff: used to enhance her magic, Tarot Cards: used to tell the fortunes of others and sometimes used channel magic through

Symbol: None

Outfit[b] When Lilith is ready to battle she wears an outfit adorned with gold. It has a fun hat that comes with it. Though it doesn't give her in particularly different powers. The style out her outfit is comparable to a priestess's, especially those from the Middle east region.



[b]Attacks:
Lilith of Azar (Type - Offensive)

• Energy Requirement - (Low)
  
• Accuracy - (80%)
  
• Appearance – Black Energy
  
• Effects – Damaging Electrocuting Sensation
  
• Weakness – Any sort of Light Magic
  

Samael Belzebuth (Type - Offensive)

• Energy Requirement - (Very High)
  
• Accuracy - (20%)
  
• Appearance – Black Energy
  
• Effects – High Intensity Attack with Low Accuracy But has the Power to Kill
  
• Weakness – Can only hit one target, extremely low accuracy
  

Samael Cain The Solomon (Type - Offensive)

• Energy Requirement - (Average)
  
• Accuracy - (50%)
  
• Appearance – Black Energy
  
• Effects – Medium Intensity Attack
  
• Weakness – Light Magic
  

Reversing The Tree of Life(Type - Offensive)

• Energy Requirement - (Very High)
  
• Accuracy - (10%)
  
• Appearance – Opens The Door to Death
  
• Effects – Opens the Door to Death for those who are nearing the end of their lives
  
• Weakness – Can allow the very recently deceased to re-enter the modern realm, lengthy incantation.
  

Eko Eko Azarak(Type - Offensive)

• Energy Requirement - (Low)
  
• Accuracy - (100%)
  
• Appearance – A Shadowy Light
  
• Effects – Summons the power of Demons to be blessed on others
  
• Weakness – Difficult to place on pure-hearted people
  

Magic Squares(Type - Defensive)

• Energy Requirement - (Low)
  
• Accuracy - (70%)
  
• Appearance – Invisible
  
• Effects – Traps the Purehearted in a Magic Square
  
• Weakness – Can be broken by strong attacks
  

Knight/Guardian History: Former Villain Purified By Sailor Moon

Mission: Protect the Humans Race

Guardian:Demon Lilit, Demon Lilim
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This is the correct place for Canon submissions. I will review your submission in a little while.

What needs to be fixed

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Please put in the thread title of your OC the applicable header, before their name:
CIVILIAN:
SENSHI:
KNIGHT:
GUARDIAN:
ANTAGONIST:
CROSSOVER:

Please fix the title of your post.

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Appearance: Please include the physical description of your character as well as a description of their clothing or attire. Feel free to include a picture, but please do not substitute a picture for a written description.

Can you be more detailed? It would help since myself, and I sure others, are not familiar with your canon. Example: what is that "stick" she carries? That is also part of her appearance.

Under Bio and History,

I feel the sentence

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Not understanding why she should be subordinate Lilith rejected Adam as her husband and as punishment by God she gave birth to one hundred children a day which were all killed

should be made into two separate sentences.

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After Sailor Moon realized that Lilith was merely being controlled by Cain, Sailor Moon scolded Cain Astarte during their battle in the Promised Land saying that “this woman came from this land and she is your Mother” before purifying Lilith.

Is there more to her bio? Does anything happen after Sailor Moon does this? I am asking since I am not familiar with this character.

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Items: Magic Staff, Tarot Cards

Are her items the source of her power? What are the cards used for? A one sentenced description along with these would be helpful.

Does you character transform or is she "good" after Sailor Moon does her thing? I would suggest including something for "transformation".

Which time area does you canon belong? Tokyo City?

Sorry, unfortunately after Lilith's purification. Sailor Moon briefly mentioned that Lilith was simply lonely and misunderstood but there was nothing given on what became of her.

She can use magic through tarot cards and her magic staff but she can just channel her power through them. The staff is unnamed. I don't even know where to begin with describing it X3

She doesn't transform or anything when she becomes good, Sailor Moon merely shouts "I'll purify you" and says "MOON HEALING ESCALATION/MOON PRINCESS HALATION" and Lilith fades into pink light and doesn't reappear as the case with very many myu characters. Although its possible she had something to do with saving the Werewolf Child Levi it's unclear if they were referring to Lilith or Magi Saint Germain.

I'll fix it up, thanks for your help

I'm not really sure, considering Lilith has been around since the beginning of the Earth but she appears during the Dracul Series which takes place in the 21st Century.

Ok, just notify me when you are finished fixing your profile.

Have you added anything new to the profile?

Well I have... but I'm not sure its ready so I'm just still thinking about it X3 You can see if its ready now if you would like

I will do it in a bit. Just let me know when you add to it etc.

Much better.

I would say remove the information about the sabbath from the appearence part and add it to the biisection. After you do this notify me either here or by PM and I will approve the profile.

I put the sabbat part into the bio part, she doesn't recognise the Sabbath X3 , it would be kinda odd for her to be celebrating the Lord's Day wouldnt it?

Haha sorry, I just skimmed since I was at college on my kindle and crammed on time. At least you got my point :p You moved that to the bio part.

Approved

I assume this is for Tokyo City, correct? She is a"present character?" I have added her to the list. The current list can be found here : http://www.thegalaxycauldronforums.com/t1143-list-of-available-characters#22017

Thankyou ^^