Character Name: Orianne
Gender: Female
Age: 19
 
Character Description: 
·          5’7, 130 lbs
 
 
·          Silver hair, black eyes, pale skin
 
 
·          Often wears simpler shirts and pants, mainly silver, black and brown, except when she’s working with metal, she wears the appropriate work clothing and protective gear.
 
 

Additional Information: Orianne was in an elementary school class working on a welding project, when she accidently burned herself and fused a piece of metal in her hand. She then released that she could absorb the metal and that her body had metal properties. She then got a vision from an unknown source, asking her to accept her destiny as a Sailor Senshi. She would be needed to help rid her planet of the horrible crime wave it was experiencing, mainly from intruders originating on other planets. She did accept her destiny, having seen the first-hand effects of how the crime wave had impacted those close to her. A henshin stick formed in front of her and she transformed into Sailor Metallon for the first time.
 
RP Sample: Orianne often wished for two things, that she didn’t sleep in as often and that she was faster. After paying the taxi driver the fare, she raced down the path into her town’s park as fast as she could to meet up with her best friend Heather. Orianne would often stay up late fighting dangerous criminals which meant she usually slept in. Orianne saw Heather on a bench, while being careful not to engage in eye contact with anyone who didn’t look friendly.
 
 
 
 
 
“I am so sorry Heather. I’ve been late for the past three years, ever since I took that apprenticeship job, I just don’t have that much energy outside of work.” Orianne said as she and Heather saw each other, Orianne gasping for breath.
  
“It’s okay Orianne. Sit down so we can drink our water and we’ll both feel better.” Heather said as Orianne took a spot next to Heather on the bench.
 
 
 
 
Senshi Name: Sailor Metallon
Senshi Fuku:
Powers and Magical Items:
 
 
·         Henshin Stick: Metallon shouts “Metallon Power Makeup!” A large amount of metal spins around her and merges into her, as her Senshi form is revealed.
 
 
·         “Metallon Polymer Merge!” Metallon shouts this phrase as a silver coloured orb forms between her hands before blasting it at an opponent, causing injury and their body to temporarily merge with a metallic substance, slowing them down.
 
 
·         “Metallon Weld Spark!” Metallon shouts this phrase as sparks start radiating from her and blast in whatever direction she’s facing, causing severe burns to anyone that comes into compact and causing their body to be disfigured, possibly preventing them from using certain powers. However overuse of this attack may cause her to be burned herself.
 
 
·         “Metallon Sword Strike!” Metallon’s most powerful attack, shouting this phrase causes her to create a metal sword that can absorb metal substances nearby, increasing the size of the sword and making her strikes faster. Using this power can drain Metallon of energy.
 
 
·         Additionally Metallon has the ability to change the structure and shape of any metal nearby. She can also absorb metal to improve her health.
 
 
·         Metallon’s main weakness is her overall speed, due to the metal properties in her body. This can make her take more damage but also makes her less aware of how much physical pain she is in.

This is ready for review now. I plan on making an Advanced profile for Metallon soon but needed to do a Relaxed one quickly for the Event RP going on. Also the formatting is a bit weird because I did this in Microsoft Word.

I really like the way you've incorporated the metal into her body, as well as how it manifests itself in her senshi form. It's really neat!

I just have a question about the call she got about accepting her destiny as senshi. Who was it who made the call? Is it a company that she works for maybe? Or is it unknown to her as to who it was? Just a line or two explaining this would be good!

Thanks! =]

Elaborated on the vision (switched from call to vision if it's okay) that led her to accept her destiny as Sailor Metallon.

That's perfectly fine =]

Approved!