| | Relaxed Senshi: Small Lady/Sailor Earth | |
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zodiacrain Pyramidal Crystal
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| Subject: Relaxed Senshi: Small Lady/Sailor Earth 19th December 2013, 10:12 am | |
| Character Name: Princess Setsuko Small Lady Chiba Gender: Female Age: 10 years old Character Image: Small Lady greatly resembles the canon ChibiUsa. She has the same hair color (pink) and eye color (red). However, her hair style is different- she keeps her hair in a bun on the top of her head, like her mother Setsuna, and keeps the rest of her hair down. Additional Information: In this story, Small Lady is the child of Mamoru Chiba and Setsuna Meiou. She is familiar with Neo Queen Serenity and her daughter, but is unaware that Serenity once dated Endymion. Since she is not Usagi's daughter, her parents named her a name similar-sounding to Setsuna, a name meaning "winter child." She will respond to either "Setsuko" or "Small Lady." Setsuko is an energetic, curious child. She never felt lonely, at least never to the same level as the canon ChibiUsa, and though she doesn't have the widest social circle she's content with the group of friends she has. Setsuko has a lot of aspirations in life; she wants to travel the Earth, become a strong Senshi, become a beautiful Queen like her mother, and help guard the Time-Space Door. RP Sample: Your character is running late for a meeting! Why are they late and what do they say when they get there?- Spoiler:
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"Luna-P, be quiet," Small Lady whined at the alarm, and sure enough, Luna-P obeyed. She opened her eyes briefly- she couldn't see any sunlight streaming through the pink curtains. It was barely even morning. Why did Luna-P try to wake her up?
Oh well, it didn't matter now. She closed her eyes. Her bed was nice and soft. Now that she thought about it, as she dozed off, hadn't this happened earlier today? Luna-P had tried to wake her up three... no, four times already. Why?
Had Small Lady set an alarm for some reason?
Setsuko sat up in bed, a frown crossing her face. "Luna-P... Is it the 19th?"
The small, floating ball- given to her as a gift by one of Neo Queen Serenity's soldiers, Sailor Mercury, back when she was four- rolled forward slightly. A nod.
With a groan, Setsuko yanked the pink sheets off and moved to the side of the bed. "Please tell me it's not six AM yet?"
Luna-P didn't respond at all. Setsuko, fearing the worst, felt a burst of energy. She jumped out of bed and pulled off her pink nightgown, running to the closet to find her Princess dress. All the while, she whined to Luna-P: "I can't believe I'm late! Mom is the Guardian of Time! I should have a better internal clock!"
She pulled the pink dress on and ran to the mirror. She didn't have time to put her hair up in its characteristic style, but she didn't want to leave with scraggly hair either. "I'm always late for this, too," Small Lady sighed, brushing her hair quickly. "Dad's going to start asking me if I got into a fight with the Moon Princess."
Of course, Small Lady hadn't. She was best friends with the Moon Princess, and she loved the monthly visits the Royal Family took to the moon. She just wasn't a big fan of the "leaving at 6 AM" part.
"How's my hair look, Luna-P?" Setsuko turned around, and smiled as it bobbed. "Okay, let's go!"
Senshi Information Senshi Name: Sailor Earth Senshi Fuku: Powers and Magical Items: - Luna-P: can perform "Abracadabra Pon," which allows it to turn into other objects - Prism Heart Compact, used to transform via "Earth Prism Power, Make Up!" - Pink Earth Rod, used to perform the beginner attack, "Pink Sugar Rose Attack!" She waves the rod above her head in a semicircular arch. This summons a number of pink roses (five), which attack the enemy. It's not a strong enough attack to do serious damage, but can pin objects to walls and distract enemies well. -"Earth La Sugar Bomber!" A move similar to Tuxedo Mask's "Tuxedo La Smoking Bomber." Using the Pink Earth Rod, she sends a blast of pink energy at the enemy. She learned the attack more recently and it can do a fair amount of damage. -"Underworld Song!" Created when Setsuko tried to imitate Sailor Pluto's "Dead Scream," this attack creates a ball of dark brown and red energy from the Pink Earth Rod, which fires at the enemy. It's a powerful attack, but Setsuko has yet to master it, so it takes a lot of energy out of her. Once she uses this attack in battle, she'll have trouble using any other attacks after.
Last edited by zodiacrain on 29th December 2013, 10:21 am; edited 3 times in total |
| | | Tsuki-love♥ RP Admin Neptune Emeritus
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| Subject: Re: Relaxed Senshi: Small Lady/Sailor Earth 20th December 2013, 6:18 pm | |
| Welcome to the RPG section, zodiacrain! Before the review process, I would like to ask you one question: Does Small Lady's personality differ from the known canon Chibiusa since Usagi is not her mother? |
| | | zodiacrain Pyramidal Crystal
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| Subject: Re: Relaxed Senshi: Small Lady/Sailor Earth 20th December 2013, 6:32 pm | |
| She did not go through the same early childhood trauma as the canon ChibiUsa. Canon ChibiUsa felt lonely, but this ChibiUsa had a childhood friend (Serenity's daughter). There was also less reason for her to be bullied, like she was in the canon- her red eyes resemble Setsuna's, so even if others were to say she didn't look like her parents, she'd be less likely to believe it.
Her personality resembles later seasons (S/SuperS and Infinity/Dream arc.) |
| | | Tsuki-love♥ RP Admin Neptune Emeritus
Title : Myuteer ~ GC's official Harumichitic Posts : 10050 Join date : 2012-07-06 Age : 27 Location : Kaguya Shima
| Subject: Re: Relaxed Senshi: Small Lady/Sailor Earth 21st December 2013, 6:35 am | |
| In that case, I feel that this profile would be better assigned to the Otaku/Crossover subforum and it will be moved there. Sailor Pluto (and her moderator assistant) will take over the review process of your character profile. Thank you! |
| | | Crystalsetsuna Lotus Crystal
Title : The Crazy Beardie Lady. Official GC Princess Serenity Posts : 3648 Join date : 2012-06-08 Age : 33 Location : Florida
| Subject: Re: Relaxed Senshi: Small Lady/Sailor Earth 21st December 2013, 7:31 am | |
| thank you for the shift over tsuki! alright zodiac, you'll want to edit in all the new information you showed me, along with the personality differences that make this girl otaku.^-~
also, perhaps the fact that Setsuna is her mother now, maybe some kind of time/underworld beginner attack to go with her pink heart attack?...which maybe could be a pink rose attack because of her father!
...which makes me wonder, was the canon chibiusa so weak because the silver crystal is difficult to master? which might mean she's a bit more powerful in the beginning with the more masterable Pluto powers mixed in her. |
| | | zodiacrain Pyramidal Crystal
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| Subject: Re: Relaxed Senshi: Small Lady/Sailor Earth 21st December 2013, 9:03 am | |
| I wouldn't mind moving this thread to the fan character section.
I love the idea of a Pink Rose attack! I edited the post to rename the attack.
I ended up making her second attack based on Tuxedo Kamen's powers as well. I could see Setsuko developing time-related powers later on in life, but I also imagine time-related magic would be a bit more difficult to master, especially for a child Setsuko's age.
Since ChibiUsa wants to be just like her mother, I believe this is a trait Setsuko would carry over: I could imagine Setsuko desperately wanting a time-related attack, thinking up time-related phrases and shouting them in Senshi form during practice/training. When she can't think up any good original attacks, she'll just yell her mother's attack phrases, and when it doesn't work, she'll get frustrated. XD
Would you mind if Sailor Pluto and Setsuko had a group attack, like Sailor Moon and Chibi Moon did? |
| | | Crystalsetsuna Lotus Crystal
Title : The Crazy Beardie Lady. Official GC Princess Serenity Posts : 3648 Join date : 2012-06-08 Age : 33 Location : Florida
| Subject: Re: Relaxed Senshi: Small Lady/Sailor Earth 21st December 2013, 9:22 am | |
| looking great so far! however please don't forget to add the personality traits that make Setsunko different from Chibiusa.
and it'd be cute if she tries coming up with time attacks! and do you mean an attack like when they both used the moon kaleidoscope attact? i could image that being possible when she figures out how to..i dunno, morph her Pink Earth Rod into her own Time Staff, or possibly is able to summon her own.
also, since time attacks could be to difficult for a child, what about underworld attacks, like Pluto's Dead Scream? |
| | | zodiacrain Pyramidal Crystal
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| Subject: Re: Relaxed Senshi: Small Lady/Sailor Earth 21st December 2013, 10:01 am | |
| I added a third, underworld-themed attack. What do you think of it?
I also added a paragraph to the profile section describing her personality. I have trouble summarizing character's personalities, so I'm not sure what else to add to it. |
| | | Crystalsetsuna Lotus Crystal
Title : The Crazy Beardie Lady. Official GC Princess Serenity Posts : 3648 Join date : 2012-06-08 Age : 33 Location : Florida
| Subject: Re: Relaxed Senshi: Small Lady/Sailor Earth 21st December 2013, 10:24 am | |
| quite nice! though what is the symbolism behind the Song part of the name? and i'm not entirely sure Pink Lady would be a good name, considering that was part of a group attack, and this is a singular.
the personality seems fine!^^ can't find anything there that might require any refining. |
| | | Sailor Saturn Outer Senshi Admin Events & Storyline Admin
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| Subject: Re: Relaxed Senshi: Small Lady/Sailor Earth 29th December 2013, 5:20 am | |
| It looks like you are doing very well so far with this profile! Please let me know when you are ready for it to be reviewed, or if you need any extra help! |
| | | zodiacrain Pyramidal Crystal
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| Subject: Re: Relaxed Senshi: Small Lady/Sailor Earth 29th December 2013, 10:21 am | |
| The profile is ready to be reviewed. |
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| Subject: Re: Relaxed Senshi: Small Lady/Sailor Earth 2nd January 2014, 3:47 am | |
| Setsuko is a cutie. Seeing how you meshed together bits of Mamoru and Setsuna, while still being her own person is really neat! I especially love her attacks, too xD It will be a joy to see her in action in the RPG! Approved |
| | | zodiacrain Pyramidal Crystal
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| Subject: Re: Relaxed Senshi: Small Lady/Sailor Earth 2nd January 2014, 5:36 pm | |
| Thank you, Sailor Pluto!
I'm thinking about changing one element of her design (her skintone), a few item names (Pink Earth Rod -> Garnet Earth Rod), and the name of two attacks ("Pink Sugar Rose Attack" and "Underworld Song," though I'm still debating what I want to rename them.) Would it be alright to change those things? |
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