Hey all, I have a homework assignment that involves making a PSA/Poster to go along with an essay I wrote. The topic was how the integration of technology such as apps can assist in mental healthcare at universities. Please view it in full size.

Right now I'm not feeling too hot on the text in the white box on the bottom. Any advice?



Note: I changed the URL to some random letters bc I don't feel comfortable giving out the name of my local university.


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I think you might want to consider changing the text at the top as well. The text seems a little goofy compared to the serious topic the ad is talking about. Personally I think the font you're using at the bottom would look better at the top since I think it grabs the attentions viewer more. (Every time I look at the ad my eyes keep drifting towards the bottom.) If you decide to change the font around, you could try using a smaller text like Century Gothic or Code Bold for the bottom font. (Actually that entire box might possibly look even better smaller.)

Finally, the blue seems a little bright in my opinion. A darker shade of blue might work better.

Hope this helps! uwu.

THANK YOU Yunie! It looks way better. I was searching for a good sans serif font to use but I just couldn't figure it out. I think the dark background is great as well.

It looks amazing! Glad I could help! 

The san serif font you have at the bottom is gorgeous! I agree though, I think the font at the top is too playful for the topic. Since the bottom text is san serif, maybe consider a serif? Caslon Pro is always good, as is Cambria. 

(I also love the Avenir family for san serif fonts.)

Right now, my issue with it is the sizing on the iPhone - it looks squished and fake. Is there any way you can mess with the original image?

I also like the darker background, but it feels too simple for me. 

You're working with a great image and I would hang it on my campus - keep going!