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 (Approved) Advanced Antagonist: Beryl

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PostSubject: (Approved) Advanced Antagonist: Beryl   (Approved) Advanced Antagonist: Beryl I_icon_minitime6th August 2014, 8:43 pm

Character Name: Beryl
Gender: Female
Age and Date of Birth: unknown

Used Canons:
Manga, PGSM, Anime

Appearance: She has long wavy black hair and purple eyes. She wears a headpiece that has one jewel on it. She wears earrings and a necklace to match the headpiece. She wears a black dress with puffy sleeves, slightly low cut, with an asymmetrical off white apron type thing on top of it, and the top of the neckline and sleeves are trimmed with white, the dress goes to her ankles. On her feet she wears brown sandals.
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When she turns evil her appearance changes. Her hair turns from black to red. Her hair is still wavy. Her eyes are orange. She likes to wear purple dresses. Her headpiece gets a black tiara added to it and the jewel hanging on it becomes the top of the head piece. She has two necklaces made from the same crystal in her earrings and headpiece. She wears a black bracelet on her wrist. She grows horns on her shoulders and gets fangs.
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Personality: She is a kind and very smart woman. Her head was never in the clouds she thought with her head and never followed her heart. Originally her ambition was to help the people of the Earth. She socializes well with people she was never a shy person. She likes to read, learn, travel, walk, and loves the rain. She doesn't like people who use people.

Slowly as she got to the Earth Kingdom, however, she started to fall for a prince and started following her heart. Her ambition was to have him. Nothing else mattered. She had met the Shitennou a couple times, but ignored them for the most part.

Any Unique Abilities/Skills: She is a sorceress. Her powers are based on the earth and healing.   

Her personality as Queen Beryl: She has a tendency to get jealous very easily. This emotion leads to possessiveness. She is also very impatient and this leads to her being easily angered. She becomes a power hungry woman driven with her hate of Princess Serenity. She only wants Endymion and as things progress her unrequited love drives her to turn those closest to Endymion against him. She is a very persuasive and beautiful woman and she uses those to her advantage.

Any Unique Abilities/Skills: She is a sorceress. She gained her stronger powers from Queen Metallia. She has immense power, but uses it mainly to drain life force. She has the ability to corrupt others and make them do her bidding. She has the power to revive people, when they are dead she can bring them back to life, but it takes a lot of time.

History: Beryl was raised by a middle class family who spent their time teaching her about everything there was to learn in world. She loved to learn new things and eventually became a Sorceress She was a very smart and kind woman. She didn't feel complete though, so she traveled trying to find that piece of her that she thought was missing. Through her travels she realized that there was much more to the world than she had realized, she was overcome with the beauty of the world because it was never depicted that way in books. Eventually she made her way into the Earth kingdom and became a member of the court.

How she becomes a villain: Because of her unrequited love for Endymion she became obsessively jealous of Princess Serenity when she found out he was in love with her. Queen Metalia saw the malice in Beryl's heart and corrupted Beryl. This then lead to the revolt against the Moon kingdom.

Storyline Specific Information: Optional! To be filled in during storylines, not before! This section is for you to detail information about your character that is specific to a certain storyline(s). Fill out this section with each separate storyline, so you don't have to send multiple character profile applications for the same character.


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"It's raining outside..."
It's been a while since Beryl has seen rain. It was a beautiful thing, where she's from Rain is a very rare thing. She'd probably only seen it a couple times before this. The way the water fell to the earth and brought new life and nourished the old life. As she let the rain fall on her she raised her head to the sky to let it touch her face. It was a nice feeling. The smell of the rain on a summer day was wonderful. As she continued to walk she noticed someone watching her in awe. What was it that he wanted?


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PostSubject: Re: (Approved) Advanced Antagonist: Beryl   (Approved) Advanced Antagonist: Beryl I_icon_minitime7th August 2014, 5:07 pm

Is this profile ready for review?

Before the review process, could you expand her personality section? You can include traits that were born after Beryl became a villain, and also general personality traits (for example how she socializes with others, and what her dreams/ ambitions are). Smile

For physical appearance, could you also describe her looks as Queen Beryl of the Dark Kingdom?

As an answer to your question about her history, I would like to see a description about how she became a villain. Smile

Please let me know if you want help with the descriptions, Selene!
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PostSubject: Re: (Approved) Advanced Antagonist: Beryl   (Approved) Advanced Antagonist: Beryl I_icon_minitime8th August 2014, 8:35 am

Thanks Neptune! I'll work on it later and then let you know when it's ready for review.
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PostSubject: Re: (Approved) Advanced Antagonist: Beryl   (Approved) Advanced Antagonist: Beryl I_icon_minitime9th August 2014, 8:39 am

This is ready for review. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: (Approved) Advanced Antagonist: Beryl   (Approved) Advanced Antagonist: Beryl I_icon_minitime10th August 2014, 6:18 pm

Could you mention that Beryl had dark purple eyes when she was still a human?

I would like to see a bit more written about her personality. Some points you could mention are Beryl's tendency to get jealous easily, this emotion leading to possessiveness that even surpassed her feelings towards Endymion, and her impatience which makes her easily angered. Smile

Can you also mention her powers as Queen Beryl in the Unique Skills/ Abilities section, and describe her powers as a sorceress? (Since the term is quite wide ranged.)

I noticed you wrote Beryl made her way to the Moon Kingdom in her history, but you probably meant the Earth Kingdom, am I right?

Thank you, Selene! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: (Approved) Advanced Antagonist: Beryl   (Approved) Advanced Antagonist: Beryl I_icon_minitime11th August 2014, 8:09 am

Edited again! Thanks Neptune! I didn't realize I had accidentally put Moon Kingdom instead of Earth Kingdom.
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PostSubject: Re: (Approved) Advanced Antagonist: Beryl   (Approved) Advanced Antagonist: Beryl I_icon_minitime12th August 2014, 9:50 pm

No problem, and apologizes for the delay!

In the powers section, are you referring to Beryl's powers as a member of the Dark Kingdom? I am asking this since it was implied that she gained a lot of power from Queen Metallia, rather than being very powerful when not an antagonist, and your description matches her powers as Queen Beryl. In this case, could you describe her powers as a 'good' sorceress a bit?

Could you make the description of her personality a bit longer? You could mention her likes and dislikes, and if she had a relation to the Shitennou after starting to work in the Earth castle. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: (Approved) Advanced Antagonist: Beryl   (Approved) Advanced Antagonist: Beryl I_icon_minitime13th August 2014, 6:15 pm

Edited again. Smile
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