I want my character to be computerized (maybe linked with electricity in a way)/iced based but I am not sure how to make this work.

Her back story is very minimal at the moment. So far she comes from a far away asteroid somewhere in the milky way galaxy. This asteroid is located a bit further than Pluto.

This is all I have so far. Feel free to throw out ideas and to help this Character of mine grow!

! Further than Pluto - you're talking a KBO! A Kuiper Belt Object (which Pluto would be referred to now if it weren't completely spherical )! Being so, ice would be a good representation of the planet, but you could make it even cooler to have ammonia-ice based attacks instead of water-based attacks.

Now, I'm a little rusty on KBO's like Eris, so I'mma wiki it.

Wiki wrote:

The Kuiper belt ( /ˈkaɪpər/, rhyming with "viper"), sometimes called the Edgeworth–Kuiper belt, is a region of the Solar System beyond the planets extending from the orbit of Neptune (at 30 AU) to approximately 50 AU from the Sun.[1] It is similar to the asteroid belt, although it is far larger—20 times as wide and 20 to 200 times as massive.[2][3] Like the asteroid belt, it consists mainly of small bodies, or remnants from the Solar System's formation. While the asteroid belt is composed primarily of rock, ices, and metal, the Kuiper objects are composed largely of frozen volatiles (termed "ices"), such as methane, ammonia and water. The classical (low-eccentricity) belt is home to at least three dwarf planets: Pluto, Haumea, and Makemake. Some of the Solar System's moons, such as Neptune's Triton and Saturn's Phoebe, are also believed to have originated in the region.[4][5]

... scattered disc objects such as Eris have extremely eccentric orbits that take them as far as 100 AU from the Sun.[nb 1]...

Okay! So she's really really out there, protecting the Solar System. Perhaps she could be the senshi of Haumea, or Makemake?

Wiki wrote:

...Pluto is the largest known member of the Kuiper belt, if the scattered disc is excluded. Originally considered a planet, Pluto's position as part of the Kuiper belt has caused it to be reclassified as a "dwarf planet". It is compositionally similar to many other objects of the Kuiper belt, and its orbital period is identical to that of the KBOs known as "plutinos". In Pluto's honour, the four currently accepted dwarf planets beyond Neptune's orbit are called "plutoids".

Hmm... so maybe she could be a senshi under Pluto's leadership... Else, Pluto's SilMil family as she was always and will always be bound by the door... Maybe a senshi with the job of making sure no dangerous foreign particles make their way into the system? Their orbits are really eccentric (or, really oval-ish) so it would take a team of them to really scour things over... and they'd just alert Neptune and Uranus of the bigger meanies that they can't stop. Hmmm...

Now, we can easily tune her into electricity as electricity and magentism are best conducted via super freezing cold metals, or 'super conductors'; If she were to use her ice on anything metallic, the electricity would pound through that thing.

And if you wanted to do computer-based, like she can control circuits and such, it'd be like nano-electricity, or just control over charged particles and the like.


OOOOR OR OR OR OR She is easily able to interrupt computer-based wave signals; she protected the Solar System because she was easily able to disrupt any chance of an advanced alien culture from discovering Earth, thus protecting it by keeping it invisible to their devices!

Here is what she looks like. It is supposed to be a model of "ice" on her chest. Notice that she has a ball like item on her tiara and choker.This is supposed to be her asteroid. Her boots and her darkening of hair at the end represents pulses etc in electronics.

Very nice! I didn't know you could get a multiple colored leotard on that program!

they have them towards the later options ^_^

I want one of her attacks to be "permafrost" which means frozen water. Possibly holds out her hand and creates ice wall barriers/ objects with electrical charges.

Another idea: Her ice replica on her chest is what charges her with power. If she hasn't attacked in a while, then she is fine. But, if she constantly keeps using attacks the more drained she becomes and then starts taking over her life energy if she is not careful.

She is very pale for a reason too. Since her home planet is very cold, she is adaptive to cold, therefor cold weather doesn't effect her at all and does not harm her body at all either. In fact, you would think she then has issues with warm weather, but her kind are adaptive to their temperature surroundings if they are in the certain area for X amount of time. Although, her skin never tans since she was born and lived many years in the cold.

^-^ I like it!

I found other existing KBO names if you didn't want to create one yourself:

• Sedna
  
• Orcus
  
• Quaoar
  
• Ixion
  
• Varuna
  
• Salacia
  
• Huya
  
• Hygiea
  
• Makemake (nickname: Easter bunny)
  
• Haumea (nickname: Santa)

Some other questions you can think about is

• What is her mission?
  

Being that far out in the Galaxy, is she answering to one of the Outer Senshi? What is her importance coming from what is basically (for the senshi anyway) the rim of the galaxy? Since you are thinking about giving her some Ice-based defensive attacks, you could think about her (like the Outer's) working with others to defeat enemies before they enter the galaxy and get to the Princess?

• Why is she on Earth?
  

Is she from the past? Or maybe she is from the future like the other Asteroid Senshi we know(Even if they are from a different Asteroid Belt). What about the other Kuiper Belt Asteroids? Is she from a team and they all work better on her own or did something happen to them all?


It sort of sounds like a lot, but I just want to help you think about some of your options. Things like this help a lot with choosing a personality for an Otaku.

On her planet (asteroid.. maybe i will change it to planet, not sure)Royal Females are infused with ice power and Royal men with electric. She is a unique person on her planet and is the only one who was blessed with both of the main power sources. She is considered "special" and is also next in line to be ruler of her kingdom.

Since her planet is mostly war free (for the time being) she doesn't have any real way to train herself in combat/ is unable to strengthen her abilities. This is why she leaves on a "training mission" and will return when her kingdom needs her/ it is her time to be ruler.

Kyralih wrote:

^-^ I like it!


[*]Makemake (nickname: Easter bunny)

ok, I'm being extra annoying now...but Makemake doesn't mean Easter bunny, he was the creation god in the Rapanui mythology

Chilean pride mode: off

That's just a nickname among astronomers ^^°

yes yes, that's true

damn! just realised you said nickname all along :S

my apologies Kyralih! My ADHD trolled on me again

Not to be mean, but can we keep this topic discussing my Otaku only... (if that makes sense. I don't want this getting cluttered with randomness Makes it harder to keep things organized with random posts places.

no offense meant here ^_^

Does having both power sources cause problems for her? How do her peers (other royals, palace attendants, random people on the street) view this sudden happening? It wont matter over all to the story, but it will get you in the mindset of what she's dealing with.

For example, how Hotaru was avoided and feared because she had special abilities (in and out of henshin), and how that effected the story in season three.

Well, since the people are accustomed to the Royals having power, it doesn't effect them at all. In fact, they view her as "special" or "blessed" since she is thought of to possess the most power of all the Royals. This is why she needs to leave and train so she can get the most out of her special abilities.

Something like that might also be a burden. The higher the expectations, the higher the fear of failure. That would also go hand in hand with why she would want to go off and train. If she is truly blessed, she wouldn't want to let anyone down, right?

Having decided on her elements, her personality should also reflect a little of why they are her elements. Going back to Sailor Moon again, if you think of the girls and what their elements are, you can easily see it in their personalities as well.

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Since her planet is mostly war free (for the time being) she doesn't have any real way to train herself in combat/ is unable to strengthen her abilities. This is why she leaves on a "training mission" and will return when her kingdom needs her/ it is her time to be ruler.

This can be seen here in my previous statement.

She is training till she is needed aka for war/battles or until it is her time to rule. I would think it is obvious that she is stressed on the fact she will be ruling, and as being the most powerful and still in her baby phase, she has a lot to learn still. She must still discover her other abilities etc.

I think this is very very stressful.

Wow, this is looking fantastic, Yumi-chan. You guys have done a lot of developing since I was last able to log on. ^^

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Wow, this is looking fantastic, Yumi-chan. You guys have done a lot of developing since I was last able to log on. ^^

Thank you Puuu

Anything you want to throw into here?


Also, I am having second thoughts as to where my senshi is from. Ever since I was little I used to love staring at a cluster of very very very distant dim stars. I want her to be from there, but I have no clue what it is called. (Next clear night I will look for this star group and use my google space app to see what this area is called.

^-^ if it usually appears best during the winter months, it could be the Pleiades, or the Seven Sisters; its on the other side of the constellation Taurus from Orion; it's one of the only visible 'clusters' in the sky at night.

The cluster is very very dim too. It is only a few very distant stars that seem to appear next to each other.