Hey guys, I thought if we had any entries for contests that you want the rest of the team to look over, you could post them here so they're all in the same place!

Remember constructive feedback is encouraged. 

~ Rei  

Just copying over Miss Moon Rose's post in the other thread...



Miss Moon Rose

Hey guys!  So, I just finished my entry for the Senshi Design Contest, and I was wondering if you would take a look and give me some imput!



Senshi Name:  Sailor Maia
Transformation Call:  Maia Galaxy Power, Make-Up!
History:  Sailor Maia is the mother of Sailor Mercury.  Her and seven others were the protectors of Queen Serenity during their childhood.  When her daughter, Princess Ami, was born, she stepped down as the Protector of Water and Wisdom, and later bestowed the title upon her daughter.
Attacks:  Aqua Mirage- creates a barrier of crystallized water that hides Sailor Maia's allies from the enemies.
Hydro Fusion- Summons water from the far ends of the galaxy, where it is controlled by Sailor Maia to hit enemies at dangerous, painful speeds.



So there you have it!  Any input? Modifications!  Please feel free to let me know!  And the them is Olympians/Greek/Roman, and Maia is the mother of Mercury in Roman mythology in case you didn't know.

Triple posting ftw...

I think she's really cute! I'm not hugely clued up on Senshi OCs, maybe someone else in our team will have more experience. I like her links with Mercury obv and that she has both an offensive and defensive attack. Does she have any other kind of special abilities? <3

That was where I got stuck.  I couldn't think of any more abilities, but I've been jotting down ideas.  How many attacks do you think she should have?

i too am designing a senshi!^^ i went more OC with my submission though. she also is wearing our team colors on her stomach! whoot!



Name: Sailor Agon

Transformation phrase: Agon Victory Flame, Make Up!

History: "Promoting friendly competition and an appreciation for athletics, Sailor Agon is here!" Bedecked in the colors gold, silver and bronze, this senshi has been in existance since the ancient greek times, overseeing any and all athletic competitions. She carries the Torch of Victory always, an everburning flame that if touched to a person, will grant them victory in a competition. Eventually, when the greek culture began to spread to other places, she went as well, making her way eventually all over the world.

Attacks: Tri-Flaming Soul Burn!- an attack where gold, silver and bronze flames spin together, igniting the soul with driving passion to win.

Elegance Twist!- She taps the persons head with the end of her torch, giving them the brief gift of extended gracefulness, best used during more delicate competitions that require finess.

Speed Victory Burst!- She throws one of her hair pins at the targets buttocks. If they strike and prick the target, they will suffer a sudden burst of speed that could pull them ahead of everyone else.

Wow, that one's amazing!!! My computer won't let me see the image -.- But anyway, I really like it!!!

Yeah none of these images are coming up for me

me either for some reason...dunno why. it's odd

I sent in two!

spoiler:

wow, those are absolutely amazing!!!! I wish I knew how to do things like that!

the only problem i have with the first one is the pink is suppose to represent Small Lady's Pinkateers. so if the image of Usagi was replaced with Chibiusa, i would think it'd be perfect.

but the Mercury symbol one is gooorggeeooouuss!!!! i kinda wish it had some animated sparkles...XD

Wow, we have a talented team..!! You guys are awesome!