Yeah, but I probably need to make it smaller than that. 5 pages even may be pushing it.

I'd reduce the amount of things you are covering in the paper. Instead of doing all five points that you listed earlier, maybe reduce to two or three. You can usually crank out a five page paper with about three main points. I guess its dependent on if your teacher wants those points to be detailed of if she/he wants a more broad review. Or maybe just type up your rough draft with all the stuff you wanted to cover originally and see what your teacher says.

That's the beauty of rough drafts. I would just write whatever and then get the teacher to help me out from there.

Good idea!

Okay so I have a few ideas for the title of the review. They are:

Fighting Evil by Moonlight

In the Name of the Moon

Moon Tiara Action

Winning Love by Daylight

I want whichever one would catch attention the most. Which do you guys think?

I like fighting Evil by Moonlight.


Thought not one of your choices, Moonlight Destiny or Moonlight Legend (english of Moonlight Densetsu) would be good.

Legend of the Moon Warrior? I think that's a book actually... >.>

Moonlight Legend might work really well!

My rough draft is now officially in Tutor Hall.

I'll go check it out and give you an opinion.

Thank you Pluto!!