So... I got this far and I'm not sure about anything anymore xD
I feel like it's way too blue and... chaotic.
Anything you all would change? Anything in particular you like?
Feel free to completely destroy it by drawing on it to explain yourself xD Also, it is in the not completed stage so it's not at final quality. And I did plan on changing the contrast/blending of mercury and maybe adding something behind her



Thanks everyone!
Brushes by Coby17 and ObsidianDawn/Readheadstock

I really love the tagline~!

Thank you! I was listening to Kokia's "Umi no soko" when I made this. So it's highly inspired by the vocals of that song.

My critique is make my siggy please.

XD

Okay in all seriousness I would only change one thing. The words are placed over a busy background where it's difficult to read. So I would suggest either changing the backgound at that area so it's more uniform or move the words to lower center in front of that bubble to make it easier to read. That's about it.

I actually really like the placement and flow of the background around Mercury and towards the text! I think there's an easy thing you could do to address what Sailor Cronus is seeing though! Try burning/darkening the areas I circled in red here:

The big bubble in the front especially needs it as it's competing with Mercury for visual attention. The splash of white directly under the text may not need as much darkening but you'll have to just play with it :p.

See what it looks like after that! You may not need to adjust anything else. It's a lovely Sig!