Can you guys say your thoughts about my first animated avatar ,please ?

It looks funny, but that's the point right?

And maybe you should cut the scene a bit, it's kinda long for an animated avi. I think that the first 4 seconds are unnecessary. Unless the avatar was supposed to be like that.

It's a nice avatar though.

Oh you mean lik this ?

I'm glad to see you have been trying yourself on animations already! Perhaps try to slow down the speed of the avatar, especially if your avatar is an 10-frame (or less)-animation.

Since you're new to animations, I'd focus genuinely on the animation, rather than the coloring already. The animation has way more priority in this case, than the coloring.

But you did a good job regarding the way you cropped the animation!

CrystalBunny wrote:

Oh you mean lik this ?

That looks super cute!

CrystalBunny wrote:

Can you guys say your thoughts about my first animated avatar ,please ?

Actually this version was good (the point was obviously being funny), what it needed is just slow down a little bit, it would made it look better. But sometimes slowing down an animation would make it a little bit of a big file =( that's the down side but since it didn't had any type of coloring it could work for the forums =)

CrystalBunny wrote:

Oh you mean lik this ?

My problem with this one is the first frames (Where she had her eyes closed), it makes the whole thing looks a little bit odd in my opinion, also another factor is the speed, slowing it down a notch would probably make it look better, but it would look way much better without the first few frames.


Overall, you started pretty well with animations, congrats!!! it makes me happy to see you trying this type of graphics, is not easy, believe me, so feel free to ask me questions, i'll do my best to answer them =D

Sailor Venus wrote:

CrystalBunny wrote:

Can you guys say your thoughts about my first animated avatar ,please ?

Actually this version was good (the point was obviously being funny), what it needed is just slow down a little bit, it would made it look better. But sometimes slowing down an animation would make it a little bit of a big file =( that's the down side but since it didn't had any type of coloring it could work for the forums =)

CrystalBunny wrote:

Oh you mean lik this ?

My problem with this one is the first frames (Where she had her eyes closed), it makes the whole thing looks a little bit odd in my opinion, also another factor is the speed, slowing it down a notch would probably make it look better, but it would look way much better without the first few frames.


Overall, you started pretty well with animations, congrats!!! it makes me happy to see you trying this type of graphics, is not easy, believe me, so feel free to ask me questions, i'll do my best to answer them =D

Thanks Venus !This is a "prototype"/first version =)