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Sportsnutd Lotus Crystal
Title : GC's Dark Mercury.RAINBOW DASH BEST PONY! Posts : 6893 Join date : 2015-06-29 Age : 40 Location : Littleton, Colorado
| Subject: Re: Less is More 8th December 2015, 2:43 pm | |
| Ami and Makoto were hanging out together getting ready for a picnic with the rest of the girls. They strolled into a park, not just any ordinary one, but one with multiple cherry blossom trees. The two girls liked the trees and the blossoms that fell and decided that under one would be the best for lunch. The girls laid out the blanket and the plates and food and waited for the others to arrive. - link to longer story:
NOTE: here is the link for the extended version (I hope its good) [Only admins are allowed to see this link]
Last edited by sportsnutd on 9th December 2015, 8:23 am; edited 1 time in total |
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Addelyn Lotus Crystal
Title : GC's Official Nephrite Posts : 8024 Join date : 2012-08-04 Age : 35 Location : Canada
| Subject: Re: Less is More 8th December 2015, 2:51 pm | |
| Ohhh I feel like there's more to this story xD |
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Sportsnutd Lotus Crystal
Title : GC's Dark Mercury.RAINBOW DASH BEST PONY! Posts : 6893 Join date : 2015-06-29 Age : 40 Location : Littleton, Colorado
| Subject: Re: Less is More 8th December 2015, 3:12 pm | |
| Yes There would be..hmm i might make it longer on my own time..thanks for the idea Addy. |
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mercury_viola_rhapsody Lotus Crystal
Posts : 2124 Join date : 2013-05-11 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Less is More 8th December 2015, 3:21 pm | |
| I like yours, sportsnud.
I also expanded mine on AO3; are we allowed to post links here? |
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Addelyn Lotus Crystal
Title : GC's Official Nephrite Posts : 8024 Join date : 2012-08-04 Age : 35 Location : Canada
| Subject: Re: Less is More 8th December 2015, 4:24 pm | |
| If you've expanded one you've already written, you can go back and edit that post with a link to an longer version, how about that? |
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Brit-chan Senior Member Small Lady Emeritus
Title : Queen of the Cat Kingdom Posts : 23236 Join date : 2011-06-23 Age : 37 Location : Lafayette, LA
| Subject: Re: Less is More 8th December 2015, 8:32 pm | |
| The day had come. The day to test my invention. It was an invention of lightning speed. It would allow me to cross the entirety of the United States in 2 hours. This invention, my life's work, it came to me in a dream, elves running gracefully, their agility unhuman. I call it E.L.F.S. (yes i know that is improper grammar, but bare with me), the Electrosuit of Light Fast Speed. I put the mechanical head band that covered my ears and gave me the likeness of my inspiration. It was time. - Spoiler:
Thought maybe I should do something...different. xD
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Addelyn Lotus Crystal
Title : GC's Official Nephrite Posts : 8024 Join date : 2012-08-04 Age : 35 Location : Canada
| Subject: Re: Less is More 8th December 2015, 8:42 pm | |
| That was really cute Brit. |
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Cosmos-Hime Moderator
Title : ミ☆ GC's official Sailor Cosmos! ミ☆ Posts : 12832 Join date : 2014-11-14 Age : 32 Location : ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
| Subject: Re: Less is More 11th December 2015, 11:37 am | |
| Did you know that most cherry trees are planted around important buildings like schools? This makes it less likely that the trees would be cut down. If someone were to bury something under one of these trees, chances are that it would go unnoticed. This is where she found it while trying to bury an old sketchbook. A child’s letter to Santa dated from the nineteen fifties. Does Santa know to check under these trees? |
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Sailor Neptune Outer Senshi Admin RP Graphics & Canon Admin
Title : Drinker of Roleplayers' Tears ~ The Internationaliest™ Posts : 9577 Join date : 2013-07-25 Age : 37 Location : Canada
| Subject: Re: Less is More 11th December 2015, 11:47 am | |
| That day when Usagi left to face Nehelenia on her own, Rei had tried to stop her.
All she got was a fistful of cherry blossoms.
Rei would never forget how it felt.
Months later, she died in Usagi’s arms, and when Usagi reached for her, she only got a fistful of lights.
It’d take Rei a long time to forgive herself for letting Usagi feel what she felt that day with the cherry blossoms.
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Addelyn Lotus Crystal
Title : GC's Official Nephrite Posts : 8024 Join date : 2012-08-04 Age : 35 Location : Canada
| Subject: Re: Less is More 11th December 2015, 11:51 am | |
| Bubbles with the feels you kill me! |
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Sportsnutd Lotus Crystal
Title : GC's Dark Mercury.RAINBOW DASH BEST PONY! Posts : 6893 Join date : 2015-06-29 Age : 40 Location : Littleton, Colorado
| Subject: Re: Less is More 11th December 2015, 11:56 am | |
| So..many..feels!! nice job Bubbles |
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Cosmos-Hime Moderator
Title : ミ☆ GC's official Sailor Cosmos! ミ☆ Posts : 12832 Join date : 2014-11-14 Age : 32 Location : ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
| Subject: Re: Less is More 11th December 2015, 11:57 am | |
| Who told you that was okay Mercury omg. That was really good though wow bravo |
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Sailor Neptune Outer Senshi Admin RP Graphics & Canon Admin
Title : Drinker of Roleplayers' Tears ~ The Internationaliest™ Posts : 9577 Join date : 2013-07-25 Age : 37 Location : Canada
| Subject: Re: Less is More 11th December 2015, 12:27 pm | |
| Thank you, thank you I didn't have an idea for this originally, but then that scene from Stars popped into my mind and I thought it was perfect. |
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PoetofMercury Pyramidal Crystal
Title : GC's Official Loof Merrow Posts : 1656 Join date : 2011-08-04 Age : 47 Location : Long Island NY
| Subject: Re: Less is More 11th December 2015, 4:59 pm | |
| Wow, I was floored by that one. Amazing that you made that connection. You guys stop it with the feels or I just night cry. LOL |
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Eternal Knight Lotus Crystal
Title : GC's Official Prince Diamond Posts : 2408 Join date : 2015-07-20 Age : 32 Location : Teleporting between Elysion and Nemesis
| Subject: Re: Less is More 11th December 2015, 7:32 pm | |
| They had flowers that resembled this where they come from. It wouldn't be there anymore, or their memories would be left in a pile of ashes, but those small petals bring familiar feelings unto his chest and a rather annoying lump in his throat. Those were larger, of course, their curves not as round, but he took some in his hand and kept walking. Kinmoku was gone but not its heart.
Meh, headache doesn't help the writing but I missed the last one so. Also how dare Mercury omg. Feels. |
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Addelyn Lotus Crystal
Title : GC's Official Nephrite Posts : 8024 Join date : 2012-08-04 Age : 35 Location : Canada
| Subject: Re: Less is More 12th December 2015, 8:38 am | |
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Empress Vesta Lotus Crystal
Title : GC's Official VesVes/Sailor Vesta and GC's Official Sailor Quartet Lover Posts : 744 Join date : 2013-10-12 Age : 26 Location : Crystal Tokyo
| Subject: Re: Less is More 12th December 2015, 8:55 am | |
| Breathe in. Breathe out. They listened to her, the fearsome warrior with flowers in her hair and ribbons on her chest. And Sailor Ceres listened back with a smile on her lips. She held out her arms, embracing the sun like her floral soldiers. And with a melody as gentle as a song and powerful as a battle cry, the sky turned pink with the petals of cherry blossoms.
I tried. Also Mercury, DEM FEELS. |
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Addelyn Lotus Crystal
Title : GC's Official Nephrite Posts : 8024 Join date : 2012-08-04 Age : 35 Location : Canada
| Subject: Re: Less is More 12th December 2015, 9:13 am | |
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Addelyn Lotus Crystal
Title : GC's Official Nephrite Posts : 8024 Join date : 2012-08-04 Age : 35 Location : Canada
| Subject: Re: Less is More 16th December 2015, 10:25 am | |
| Congrats to everyone who completed the challenge for the second week! Also apologies this is late, both Anait and I are in exams and we lost track of the days! If you posted your story about Cherry Blossoms in this thread and it was under 75 words then grab this bumper: Now on to the next theme: Thievery You have 50 words to complete your story! Have fun! |
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GreenPea501 Lotus Crystal
Posts : 1453 Join date : 2014-03-15 Age : 39
| Subject: Re: Less is More 16th December 2015, 11:01 am | |
| YOU ROTTEN LITTLE PAIN IN THE….. GET BACK HERE WITH THAT! You’d gone over to your boyfriend dorm the day before and ended up staying the night because it got late, you woke up to one of his members stealing your clothes.
[42 words, other wise i go over.] |
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PoetofMercury Pyramidal Crystal
Title : GC's Official Loof Merrow Posts : 1656 Join date : 2011-08-04 Age : 47 Location : Long Island NY
| Subject: Re: Less is More 16th December 2015, 11:11 am | |
| She was a thief, a master at her trade. Sneaking in unnoticed she stole it with stealth long before I knew it was gone. I can see the truth now as I watch her innocent sleeping form. Usa-ko, the secret thief who has stolen my heart. |
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Princess Moon Lotus Crystal
Title : ✖ The name's Vivid Posts : 3199 Join date : 2014-12-14 Age : 24 Location : Germany
| Subject: Re: Less is More 16th December 2015, 11:37 am | |
| Looking at the pathetic young man that just fell to the cold dirty ground, the old hag began to smile, eventually bursting into laughter as she saw the indentation on his face that appeared just after she hit him with her purse.
“This is what you get from stealing, deary.” |
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mercury_viola_rhapsody Lotus Crystal
Posts : 2124 Join date : 2013-05-11 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Less is More 16th December 2015, 1:34 pm | |
| It's him... it's always him.... he knows about the past, doesn't he?
"What do you know, Endymion?" I ask, for he could be helpful, but he also could be Serenity's killer again.
"I have no memory." he answers, and before I can catch him, he's disappeared. |
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Sportsnutd Lotus Crystal
Title : GC's Dark Mercury.RAINBOW DASH BEST PONY! Posts : 6893 Join date : 2015-06-29 Age : 40 Location : Littleton, Colorado
| Subject: Re: Less is More 16th December 2015, 1:52 pm | |
| Thievery...the act of stealing... for me it's not an act, its a work of art and something I excel in. Who am I? Well, thats on a need-to-know basis and well you don't ...just as long as those pesky Sailor Brats and their cat don't get in my way.
*this is hard but very fun* *hope this works* |
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Cosmos-Hime Moderator
Title : ミ☆ GC's official Sailor Cosmos! ミ☆ Posts : 12832 Join date : 2014-11-14 Age : 32 Location : ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
| Subject: Re: Less is More 16th December 2015, 3:09 pm | |
| “She doesn’t even have the royal mark!”
This and more echoed through the child’s head as she ran through the royal halls, Luna-P at her heels.
She approached the glass podium where the silver crystal sat, smashed the glass and snatched it.
She was their daughter! She had to be! |
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mercury_viola_rhapsody Lotus Crystal
Posts : 2124 Join date : 2013-05-11 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Less is More 16th December 2015, 3:18 pm | |
| Cosmos, I really like yours. |
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Hikari-chan Lotus Crystal
Title : Honestly, I’ve never fit in with the world. I was always alone. Posts : 8662 Join date : 2013-05-26 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Less is More 16th December 2015, 8:22 pm | |
| can I still join, or is it too late? |
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Addelyn Lotus Crystal
Title : GC's Official Nephrite Posts : 8024 Join date : 2012-08-04 Age : 35 Location : Canada
| Subject: Re: Less is More 17th December 2015, 12:05 pm | |
| @ Artemis you can join in at any point. You can even do the 100 and 75 word ones at any point as well if you haven't done them.
@ Everyone good job guys! |
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Sailor Jupiter Inner Senshi Admin Member Relations Director
Title : *~Jupes | Jupi~* Posts : 4133 Join date : 2014-01-14 Age : 32 Location : USA
| Subject: Re: Less is More 17th December 2015, 9:23 pm | |
| Here's my 50 word one! I'll probably get around to the others soon Stealing a few kisses, stealing a glance. It's a hot blooded Christmas with the thief who stole my heart. Tall with dark eyes and darker hair. When he gets close to me... when I can feel his breath on my cheek, I close my eyes and then - swoon, swoon, swoon. |
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mercuryfan Lotus Crystal
Title : techno-geek senshi | A GC official lover of Sailor Mercury (duh) and Sailor Pluto | The GC Official Viluy Posts : 1342 Join date : 2015-01-07 Age : 53 Location : Sacramento, California
| Subject: Re: Less is More 18th December 2015, 12:48 am | |
| I have wanted to try my hand at this ever since I read most of the first category's entries. Now I consider myself to have been successful enough to submit my entries in two of the three categories so far. Cherry Blossoms - 75 words (which I hit right on the nose ) A father wasn't supposed to outlive his daughter. Especially this father and this daughter. For months after it had happened, he had been a complete wreck, unable to do anything for even himself.Finally, on the anniversary of her death, he was able to gather many petals of her favorite flower and head to her grave. With a heavy heart, he dropped the hundreds of sakura above where his pink-haired daughter lay, then collapsed himself.Thievery - 50 wordsThey kneeled on the floor of the church facing each other and prayed for success. Then the master thief headed out into the young night, about to attempt her biggest test yet.Seira watched her head away and smiled. Seira knew her friend would succeed again, as always.P.S.I'm pretty sure you can figure out the setting of the first one here, so I won't bother explaining it. But I am curious - how many of you can figure out where I got the idea for the second one here? |
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