Princess Luna Lotus Crystal
Title : GC's official Luna. Posts : 8228 Join date : 2012-02-29 Age : 31 Location : Conshohocken, Pennsylvania
| Subject: [Advanced] Seven Sisters 11th August 2015, 3:56 pm | |
| Storyline Name: Seven Sisters Creator(s): Princess Luna Forum: Free Forum Advanced or Relaxed Advanced
Plot Summary: Atlas Ashwin was a loving father who would do anything to protect his daughters. When each of his daughters were born, he made the decision to put them up for adoption. He knew that his daughters were special. Him and his daughters were all reincarnations of warriors from Taurus. If all of them were together they'd be easy to locate because their powers would awaken and they'd be hunted down and killed. The only daughter he kept by his side was Amber, his second daughter. When his first child was born he was very young and couldn't afford to take care of her. After his last daughter was born his wife, Pleione, died from childbirth. Years had passed and although Amber knew about her sisters, her father forbade her to search for them. He knew of the consequences of them finding each other, but never told Amber. Some days after Amber's 21st birthday her father passed away from a heart attack.
Amber's father had been protecting them from a man named Orion. He took over Taurus when her and her family's previous incarnations had died. Through the years he became the most powerful warrior in all of Taurus. Orion is currently ruling over Taurus. No one could defeat him, but he knew when Atlas and his family would be born again one of those girls was going to be the rightful heir to the throne of Taurus. She would be known as the Lost Pleiad. She would have a powerful star seed that could help her destroy Orion. But Orion knew if he could kill all of the girls and take their powers he could become the rightful king.
After the death of their father Atlas Ashwin, his seven daughters were awoken as senshi. As each of his daughters were awoken they were drawn to each other in New York City, and Orion was drawn to their energy. With the help of their guardian and teacher Artemis, the girls slowly learned how to use their powers. When Artemis trains them she tells them they are all reincarnations of warriors from Taurus. They are powerful and will forever be chased by Orion. One of them is the lost Pleiad, the rightful heir to the throne of Taurus. She is the most powerful warrior with a special star seed that can destroy Orion, if he doesn't get it first.
Details on any necessary information: This storyline will be loosely based off of the mythology of the Pleiades. This story will be centered around the seven sisters who were known as the Pleiades. The sisters are (in order of oldest to youngest): Maia, Electra, Taygete, Alcyone, Celaeno, Sterope, and Merope. I have rough otaku ideas for each of them in the otaku section of the forums. You can tweak them as much as you'd like. Sailor Maia, Sailor Taygete, Sailor Alcyone, Sailor Celaeno, Sailor Sterope, and Sailor Merope. The villain of this will be Orion. He was the god who was chasing after them in mythology. In mythology the youngest sister Merope was won over by Orion so we could, if we get that far, have her turn evil. Or as in other mythology have her fall for someone named Sisyphus (we can work on a better name), who she eventually leaves the senshi for and would become mortal. They will be guided and taught by Artemis, the Goddess. Also Artemis is a cat. That's the form she used to be seen in, she can be human whoever chooses to play her. She's a tan cat, grew up with Freya Vadas/Sailor Taygete.
Restrictions: Must only be Otaku senshi and villain.
Source: Pleiades Mythology
OOC Thread: None yet
Member to Character List: Princess Luna -> Amber Ashwin/Sailor Electra Xena Megalos/Sailor Maia (open) Freya Vadas/Sailor Taygete (open) Lynn Guillory/Sailor Alcyone (open) Cassandra Wisdom/Sailor Celaeno (open) Storm Dunkle/Sailor Sterope (open) Belinda Tanzer/Sailor Merope (open) Orion (open) Artemis (open)
Last edited by Princess Luna on 17th August 2015, 6:55 pm; edited 3 times in total |
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Yumi Senior Member Saturn Emeritus
Title : (∩`-´)⊃━☆゚.*・。magical weirdo, Original Saturn Posts : 9410 Join date : 2011-08-19 Age : 33 Location : Scranton, Pa
| Subject: Re: [Advanced] Seven Sisters 12th August 2015, 2:53 pm | |
| Because this is advanced, I am just asking to expand on a few things. - Quote :
- After the death of their father Atlas Ashwin
How did he pass? ---- The summary is a little bit confusing. Can you specify why they were all in adopted families? Why is Orion so important? (I see later on you mention Orion as the villain, but I was confused until then. I was thinking Orion was a sister) I suggest that perhaps making the summary into 2-3 paragraphs might lessen the confusion. Paragraph 1 can be: Why did the father pass/how? Why were the daughters with adopted families, and then introduce the villain Orion and why he wants their powers Paragraph 2 & 3 can be the details of the plot, and what a main goal can be. |
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Princess Luna Lotus Crystal
Title : GC's official Luna. Posts : 8228 Join date : 2012-02-29 Age : 31 Location : Conshohocken, Pennsylvania
| Subject: Re: [Advanced] Seven Sisters 12th August 2015, 3:32 pm | |
| Thanks Saturn! I wasn't sure how to word this or anything yet! I've edited it! |
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Yumi Senior Member Saturn Emeritus
Title : (∩`-´)⊃━☆゚.*・。magical weirdo, Original Saturn Posts : 9410 Join date : 2011-08-19 Age : 33 Location : Scranton, Pa
| Subject: Re: [Advanced] Seven Sisters 13th August 2015, 7:37 pm | |
| Perfect! Just one more question girlie, who is the king/queen/ruler currently? |
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Princess Luna Lotus Crystal
Title : GC's official Luna. Posts : 8228 Join date : 2012-02-29 Age : 31 Location : Conshohocken, Pennsylvania
| Subject: Re: [Advanced] Seven Sisters 13th August 2015, 7:49 pm | |
| Orion. I guess I should make that more clear. Thanks! |
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Princess Luna Lotus Crystal
Title : GC's official Luna. Posts : 8228 Join date : 2012-02-29 Age : 31 Location : Conshohocken, Pennsylvania
| Subject: Re: [Advanced] Seven Sisters 15th August 2015, 9:02 am | |
| This is ready for review again. |
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Yumi Senior Member Saturn Emeritus
Title : (∩`-´)⊃━☆゚.*・。magical weirdo, Original Saturn Posts : 9410 Join date : 2011-08-19 Age : 33 Location : Scranton, Pa
| Subject: Re: [Advanced] Seven Sisters 17th August 2015, 6:52 pm | |
| Approved |
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