I hope I got this right this time....

Name of the Storyline: A Baby Shower for Neo Queen Serenity (Relaxed RP)

Name of the Creator: HikariDemand

Forum: Crystal Tokyo

Plot Summary: Neo Queen Serenity and King Endymion are very excited to welcome Small Lady to the world very soon, the queen is as busy as ever preparing for her daughters arrival. The Senshi are all working to plan a surprise baby shower for Neo Queen Serenity. With the help of King Endymion, he whisks away Serenity for some alone time to allow the senshi to plan the shower.

Details on Any Necessary Information: This is the preparing for the Baby Shower, and the events leading up to the baby shower. The queen and kind are indirectly in this RP. This is more of a perspective of the events leading up to the baby shower, and the baby shower through the eyes of the senshi. The RP will start with the planning of the baby shower and will lead up to the baby shower itself. Remember the King knows about it but it must be kept a secret from NQS. The event has to be a surprise. The King and Queen's actions may be included, but no one will be playing them.

Characters for RP:
Canon Senshi
 
Restrictions: No Otaku, No Villains baby showers should be happy and villains are not happy.

I need some more information here... Is the Roleplay about the Senshi setting up for the baby shower, or is the roleplay the actual babyshower itself, or both?

In restrictions, why not add No Otaku and no Villians, therefor people aren't "Can I play as... etc." XD

PS: I "bolded" your titles in each section to make it easier to read.

I am thinking it is both for the Roleplay but more of the baby shower i think, but the events leading to it i think would be nice to include. Yes no villains or otaku would be good keep it strictly sailor moon. Thanks for bolding it, and sorry I am so new at this, but I am learning. Thanks so much for helping me out.

Ok, why don't you go through and specify the event starts with the planning and ends with the actual baby shower ending.

Maybe NQS and King Endymion shouldn't be in the RP, but rather background NPCs. That way no one is the main character, and it might be easier to RP as a first timer.  

yea that could work i will go back and edit a little later. but will definitely try to get it done tonight.

OMG I THOUGHT OUR NQS WAS PREGNANT I WAS ABOUT TO FREEEEEAK OUT

I know you were in shock, but for the future, only the Storyline creator and RP staff are allowed to post on a storyline submission. Thank you.

Also another suggestion Hikari. Why not remove that entire list of Senshi and add "Canon Senshi". A shorter character list doesn't look as scary to new comers.

Will make adjustment tomorrow when on computer again.

Approved.

yay im so excited. what is the next step?

You can head on over to the OOC thread and advertise your RP! Members can sign up there. I would also suggest creating a profile for the character you wish to play. Make sure to maintain a list of who people are.

Would you feel better if I joined the RP to help things?

yes please that would be super great, as this is my first RP and I need all the help I can get.

Ok  So we don't clutter up the storyline thread, please PM me with what you are confused about and I will help you there.