Name: Faith
Gender: Female

Birthday: August 31
Age: 16
Birthplace: Cloudsdale

Physical Description: 5’7 feet, long strong legs, and long
rainbow color hair. She is a fit muscular girl. Small bust, she’s a bit sensitive
about that. She’s wears very bright clothing. She loves jeans. Long or short.
However she mostly likes to wear long jeans, her white t-shirt with a
rainbow lightning bolt on it, and her
light blue jacket which she would either have on her or wrapped around her
waist. She also has a necklace with a crest of a cloud on it.


Another outfit she would have on a lot is her running outfit.
Her rainbow hair would be up in a pony tail. She would have on light blue Nike
shorts with a rainbow strip coming up the sides of it with her matching top but
the rainbow stripe is going across her chest.

Personality: Total tomboy. Everything she has and wants need to
be 20% more cooler. She is athletic and loves to challenge others in
competitions. If it’s racing or a simple game she would do her best to be
number one. The only thing she likes more than running fast is winning. She hates
to lose and will sometime cheat to get her way.


Others would call her lazy because she sleeps in the middle
of the day and does things at the last second. But despite her laziness she is
a hard working person. She will volunteer
to take the hardest task and do it right. She doesn’t leave people hanging and
she doesn’t slack off when she has a job. When people really need her she there
to help, but when it’s a minor job she will take a nap first before doing the
job.


Faith is mischievous. She likes to pull pranks on her
friends she does it at all the wrong times. If her and her friends walk into a
spooky house she will start telling stories about how its haunted and then make
a loud noise to scare them some more. Sometimes you never see her coming and
the next thing you know your running away from a Faith prank.


Even though Faith is a bit of a lazy, hard-working
prankster, she cannot abandon her friends for her own heart desire. She is very
loyal to her friends and to everyone who she cares for.

Any Unique Abilities/Skills: She has the element of Loyalty. She is
stead fast and strong.

History: Faith was born and raised in cloudsdale. When she was
little she found her love for speed. All she liked to do was run! For the longest
time she went to privet school but her love of sports kept her from getting
good grades. So she dropped out of school to focus on running. Her father is a
weather chaser. However not many things happen in Cloudsdale so him and Faith
move to Ponyville. So There she enters another school and join the track team
there. Faith wants to be the fasts person in Equestria! So she is training to be
able to run in the world round track competition to prove that she is the
fastest!


Even though she has a passion for speed there’s one thing she
loves next to it. She loves flying! Her dream is to join the wonderbolts! A
team of jet pilots who fly around, do tricks, and perform all over the world.
She wished to join and show off some cool flying skills of her own when she is
older.


Senshi Name:Sailor Rainbow Dash
Senshi Fuku: The body of the Fuku is white. Light blue shirk,
flat shoes with straps wrapped around her up to her knees. A light blue bow on
her lower back. White fingerless gloves with a light blue strap at the end. She
has a golden tiara with a read jewel in the middle. On her chest is a rainbow
lightning bold crest with feather coming out of it. Also sprouts light blue
feather winds on her back



Henshin/Transformation: Rainbow Dash Cutie Power Makeup! Quickly
draws a Rainbow lightning bolt in front of her and then it starts to circle
around her like a tornado as she transform. Once she’s done her wings will spread
out and she strikes a pose!



Powers:


Sonic Rainboom: She
flies up into the air and flies down as fast as she can until she creates a
sonic boom that with blow enemies miles away all around her as well as slam
down onto the Enemy. One of her most powerful attack but drains her in an instant.



Rainblow Dry: Spins
herself around her enemy to make a rainbow tornado, sucking up her enemies and
spitting them out.


Buccaneer blaze:
Creates a cloud filled with lightning then punches down on it to send
out multiple lightning strikes, however not all the lighting hits the enemy.


Filly Flash: Create a flash of light and makes a loud thunder
crack to blind and confuse the enemies.



Weapons or Magical Items: A thunder cloud

RP Sample: It was a nice sunny day! There were a few clouds out
in the sky and a nice breeze was blowing down the streets of ponyville. On a
nice summer day like this who wouldn’t want to take a nap in the middle of the
park? She was on a park bench looking up
at the clouds before her eyes started to drift. She wondered what it would be
like to sleep on a cloud. It must be comfortable. If only she could try that
one day, to fly up into the sky, plop herself onto a cloud, and sleep the day
away. Man that would be perfect! It had only been a week since Faith had move
to this small town. She kind of missed Cloudsdale along with her old friends
from school. But she knew one day they would meet again. Closing her eyes she started
to think about her first day of school. It was coming up and she really wasn’t
looking forward to it. Her last school was lame! Hopefully this school would be
cooler! Yeah right School…. Cool… There was no way that was going to happen.

Hope you don't mind, but I know Sailor Pluto is busy, so I'm going to (hopefully) help out by reviewing this.

Name: Does she have a last name?

Please put everything into complete sentences. Read over your profile again in order to catch some smaller mistakes involving grammar and spelling.

Weapons: Please provide some more description. Does she literally have control over a puffy, grey cloud from the sky? What is she able to use this cloud for? I don't see it discussed too much in the Powers section.

BUMP.

While my response is unfortunately delayed (and thank you, Chimia), I have similar questions as she does. I do, though, like your attacks. The names are pretty creative. ^^

I am reworking the profile. (delay like you. Life in the way) I had Yamichan help me out a bit, and everything will be answer.

Weapon: In the show Rainbow dash is weather manager and she controls the clouds to make it rain/snow, thunder, ect. I kinda wanted to put that in however it does seem a bit hard to explain it.

Thank you Pluto, But I can't take credit for the attack names. Those are Tricks Rainbow Dash has in the show.

I will edit the profile soon and hopefully it will be much better.

No problem, Roisa, it'll be nice to have you join us on the RP boards. Just PM me when you're ready for review, or have any questions. I'll be glad to help. ^^

Moving back to the Submission board as per request.

I would also recommend copying your document into Notepad to remove internal formatting, and then recopying it to GC. It fixes that annoying little issue that happens, XD. (GC and Word have a love-hate relationship when it comes to formatting, don't know why.)