Well, I have to write a 1-2 page essay to receive financial funding for my archaeological field season this summer. Would anyone be willing to look over it? I'll add a copy of my essay if someone is willing to help me with it. It is due by the 15th.

Here is the prompt:

*Upload Essay as a PDF or Word Document* Compose a 1-2 page typed essay in which you discuss the program you want to attend, what courses you will be taking and how they relate to your major, whether you will be taking courses in a foreign language (or studying a foreign language), and how participating in this program will benefit you in your chosen career, or future studies. Also discuss your personal qualifications, language training (if applicable) and how this program will help you meet your goals.

I can look over it for you! Just send it to me and I will look over it tomorrow morning.

Thanks, Sailor Jupiter! I sent it to your galaxy cauldron e-mail as an e-mail attachment. Let me know if it doesn't work or if you want it sent some place else.

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Thank you, Sailor Jupiter! Your advice much improved the clarity of my final paragraph.

Anyone else interested in assisting me? I've always been told that the more people you can get to look at an essay the better it will become.

If you don't mind, could you send it to me again when you are done? I'd love to see how it turns out in its final state. I wish you the best with it!